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Thank you for your quick edtion. I am glad to let me know “an unfamiliar area is better.”

Thank you for your quick edtion. I am glad to let me know the smoother and more common way to say : from my second to the last sentence.

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I appreciate your quick response. I got the correction clearly and I will make an effort to use English more naturally.

Thank you for your quick edtion. I am glad to learn the phrase” swim the crawl.”

Thank you for your quick edtion. I am sorry I misspelled “guild ” for guide”

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Hi David, Thank you for checking my writing! Regarding the " out there" part, your guess was correct. I tried to avoid the word " available " twice but it seems the word choice was not good... Thanks again!

Thank you for your quick edtion. I wonder why you used “ the past passive voice” in the last sentence.

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Thank you for the clear commentary and ample alternative expressions.

Thanks, David. Your advice is absolutely useful for improving my English skills. When I did this material, I didn't notice the other ways to write sentences, so I try to use new sentences forms next material!! I really appreciate you.

Thank you for your quick edtion. I wonder if your country has a 24 hour spa like those in Japan and what it is called in your country.

Thank you for checking. My intention is with you at the end of the second sentence. I appreciate your correction!