Thank you for your super fast edition. I am glad to learn it’s better to start with “ To build a model of Wakayama castle” in the first sentence.
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am glad to learn “ when ” is better in the first sentence like…when I was supposed to pray after the service.
Thank you for your corrections and feedback. They are helpful as always.
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am glad to learn “ exchange” is better than “ change” in the first sentence.
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am glad to learn “ the unnecessary ones” is better in the last sentence.
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am glad to learn “ grass” should be in the singular.
Thank you very much.
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am glad to learn “ a round-trip ticket” is better to say in the first sentence.
Dear David san Thank you for your useful advce. Especially in it, next one is the most interesting one which gives me a new pont of view I have never thought of: "----------General Remarks About Japanese Criminal Law", which is a book I bought as a textbook----------" "2) ---------- we use "a" here to introduce one book from a larger group. "The" sounded like this was the only textbook that you bought when you were a student." Best regards,
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am glad to learn “ the past perfect” is better in the if-clause like “ If I had said hello…”
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am glad to learn “ zoom in on letters” is better in the last sentence.
Thank you so much.
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am glad to learn “ spoke and made noises louder” is better in the third sentence.
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am glad to learn “ the good phrase “ scroll through” in the third sentence.
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am glad to learn “ the way the boss addressed my father “is better in the last sentence.
