Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn holding chair should not be hyphenated.
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn the past perfect is better in the first sentence like… had fallen onto…
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn it’s better to say “ in which direction” in the third sentence.
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn the expression “ things that would happen after drinking alcohol”in the 4th sentence.
Dear David, Thank you for your kind comments and detailed feedback again. Prepositions are always super-difficult for Japanese learners, right? Ganbarimasu! That means “I will keep going”, or “ I’ll stick with it.”, I guess. Warm regards, Ebiharumaki
Thank you for your feedback and corrections to improve my sentences as always!
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn 100 and yen after shops is hyphenated like 100-yen shops.
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn the definite article “ the” is necessary before courage like “the courage” in the last sentence.
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn it’s better to say “ we had to take the patients for a bath” in the last sentence.
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn it’s better to say “ each word” for this word in the third sentence.
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn it’s better to say “ our church’s cemetery.”
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn you say “ feel apathetic.”
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn using “ the progressive” is better in the last sentence like “be contributing to the personnel cost.”
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn “ I went through security” is better to say.
Thank you for your feedback. As always, your detailed explanations were easy to follow, and the alternative sentences you offered me were very helpful!
