Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy that my composition was almost perfect.
Thank you for your super fast edition.
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn the past perfect is better in the last sentence like “ the rain had flooded the bridge.”
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn you say “ greet us.”
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn the good expression “ our vision of what our church will be like.”
Thank you, as.always.
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn the progressive is better in the first sentence like “ more than ten people were waiting…”
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn the sentence “ I was told I could come to the dental clinic with 15 minutes” is better.
Hello, David, how are you? As always I' m happy to hear from you. Thank you the corrections you made on my essay. When I read your corrections I can see if my writings make sense to the reader. It's a great help for my English study. This time, I noticed from your correction which is for the 4th sentence. We can't live happy with others in a tight space, much less pet animals. We can't live happily with others in a tight space, much less with pets. I meant to say, 'we can't live happily with others in a tight space, and pets also can't live happily with humans in a tight space. See you next time, and bye until then. Yoko
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy that you reminds me that the past of “ cost” is cost.”
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn it’s better to use the relative pronoun “ that” in the last sentence like “ The event that the Christian Pentecost celebrates.”
Thank you, as always.
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn it’s better to say “ after changing into my nurse uniform” in the first sentence.
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn it’s better to use “ be reprimanded ” in the last sentence. I am sorry to make you unsure about the sentence. I wrote this composition while I was wearing the black socks at work.
Thank you very much.
