
Thank you very much.

Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn holding chair should not be hyphenated.

Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn the past perfect is better in the first sentence like… had fallen onto…

Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn it’s better to say “ in which direction” in the third sentence.

Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn the expression “ things that would happen after drinking alcohol”in the 4th sentence.

Dear David, Thank you for your kind comments and detailed feedback again. Prepositions are always super-difficult for Japanese learners, right? Ganbarimasu! That means “I will keep going”, or “ I’ll stick with it.”, I guess. Warm regards, Ebiharumaki

Thank you for your feedback and corrections to improve my sentences as always!

Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn 100 and yen after shops is hyphenated like 100-yen shops.

Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn the definite article “ the” is necessary before courage like “the courage” in the last sentence.

Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn it’s better to say “ we had to take the patients for a bath” in the last sentence.

Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn it’s better to say “ each word” for this word in the third sentence.

Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn it’s better to say “ our church’s cemetery.”

Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn you say “ feel apathetic.”

Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn using “ the progressive” is better in the last sentence like “be contributing to the personnel cost.”

Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn “ I went through security” is better to say.