Dear David san Thank you for your useful advce. Especially in it, next one is the most interesting one which gives me a new pont of view I have never thought of: "----------General Remarks About Japanese Criminal Law", which is a book I bought as a textbook----------" "2) ---------- we use "a" here to introduce one book from a larger group. "The" sounded like this was the only textbook that you bought when you were a student." Best regards,
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am glad to learn “ the past perfect” is better in the if-clause like “ If I had said hello…”
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am glad to learn “ zoom in on letters” is better in the last sentence.
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Thank you for your super fast edition. I am glad to learn “ spoke and made noises louder” is better in the third sentence.
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am glad to learn “ the good phrase “ scroll through” in the third sentence.
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am glad to learn “ the way the boss addressed my father “is better in the last sentence.
Thank you as always.
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am glad to learn “ …from when I was a junior high school student…” is better in the first sentence.
Dear David, Thank you for checking my essay. I'm sure that your advice will help me learn English writing. Best,
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Thank you for your super fast edition. I am glad to learn “ compatible” is the correct word in the second sentence like “ Mac computers and iPhones are compatible”
I appreciate your advice! Have a nice day. Mashroom
