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Thank you for your feedback. As always, you gave me a lot of alternative sentences, which is why I love your teaching style!

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Thank you for your feedback. As always, your detailed explanations were easy to follow, and the alternative sentences you offered me were very useful. In particular, "once every two months," "I am out," and "independent coffee shops," were phrases I was not familiar with. It was also interesting to learn that "latte" is countable, while "coffee" can be both countable and uncountable.

Hi, David, It's you, who kindly picked up my writing and checked mistakes. You gave me many good learning tips. Your corrections all make sense to me as always. Thank you. I'm gonna take a break a while. See you next time. Have a good day, Yoko