l really appreciate you, teacher David! You are the only teacher l've ever met on IDIY who mentioned the "good parts" in my sentences. l just learned it is also very useful to know it. Because l always use dictionary again and again before my diary entory, but when a teacher kindly suggests other ways to say per my request, l am not sure if my choice of words was good or not. I've just noticed that my request of drastic change has blind spot.. :0 I like the words you gave me "motto" and " whatever suit me",thank you so much! I really enjoyed working with you and see you soon :) moet
Thank you for your fast edtion. I am glad to learn the right way of saying: “ Misreading causes not to make sense.”
Thank you for your super fast edtion. I am glad that you understood my composition clearly. I wanted to make sure if the word “ mine” fits the sentences like “mine is more advantageous.” I am glad my useage of “mine” is OK.
Thank you for your fast edtion and your effort to watch “a Kiss video” online for correcting my composition. You are righ: I should have said “a member breathes fire.” I wanted to know how to say this, but I am happy now I have learned from you how to say this: “He breathes fire.” P.S. I thought you knew “Kiss.” I was a bit disappointed you did not know them.
I was able to learn about many things. Thank you!
Thank you for your super fast edtion. I am glad to know you say “compare myself with others”, not “compare me with others.”
Thank you for your super fast edtion. I am glad to know “ in” is necessary in the sentence: a car is plugged “ in” to be charged with electricity and that this sentence ( a car is pugged in to be charged with electricity) is OK.
Thank you for reading my short essay! The alternative sentences you suggested are very helpful!
Thank you for your super fast edtion. I am glad to know you say a “spatula” instead of “blade.”
Thank you for your super fast edtion. I am sorry to have confused you with my misspelling. It is not a fried cheese noodle party, it should be fried “Chinese” noodle (Yakisoba) party.
Thank you for your wonderful correction, and I was very glad to find a photo something like a nutria again.
Thank you for your super fast edtion. I am glad to know you can say either “ the boats were floating in the sea” or “the boats were floating on the sea.”
Thank you for your super fast edtion. I am glad to know “ it make sense” makes sense in my sentence.
Thank you very much!
Thank you checking my writing ,giving me a kind comment and also showing me examples useing the expressions. Your sincere checking encourages me and let me notice how careless I was in writing English like "severe" and "fur". I'm looking forward to next time.
