Thank you for your feedback and comments with useful tips. I found them very helpful to improve my writing skill and lean how native speakers write in natural way. Tomoo
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn you write like “ policemen and motorbikes.”
Thank you for your clear and helpful explanation as always! Your suggestions which mentioned both something good I made and something for improvement motivate me. See you soon!
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn the phrase “ left exposed to the sun.”
Thank you very much!
Dear David Thank you for your kind message to me everytime! Have a wonderful day!!
Dear David Thank you for the collections. I often mistake tense. Articles are also difficult to me. Your message gives me confidence. Thank you! Have a good night. Keiko23
Teacher David san Thank you for your prompt reply and informative explanations. >…Also, saying the data aren't satisfactory sounds to me more like it means the data aren't reliable・・ instead of saying that the situation in Japan needs to improve ・・・ =It is very interesting that there is a difference in meaning between 'data not satisfactory' and 'state not satisfactory '. What I meant to say was the latter, as you said. ーーーーーーー "if + present, then present." for generally true things. >"If the scientific data cannot meet the safety standards, the declaration should remain." "the regular conditional" for happenings now, rather than speculating about a change. > "and more people would understand the situation now" "the conditional perfect" for the hypothetical results. >"and more people would have understood the situation" "the past tense and should (have done something)" for a particular incident happened and a proper action in the past > "If the scientific data could not meet the safety standards, the declaration should have remained." "if + past perfect, then conditional perfect" for a different result in the past. > "If the scientific data had been not able to meet the safety standards, the declaration would have had to remain." > The past perfect describes a past action that happened before another past action, Thank you for your explanations. I think I understand the important tips. -------------------------------------------------------------------------
Dear David Thank you for your advice related to my writing. Through your changes, my content became better like native speakers. And, the content of my writing will be easy to read due to the simple and understandable changes by you. I appreciate your suggestions. I hope to learn from you soon. Sincerely, Bearmatsu
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn the phrase “ a fishing pole kit.”
Dear David, Thank you very much for your prompt feedback. Your corrections and examples are very useful. I learned to use 'or' in one option and also learned how to explain the age range.
Dear David, Thank you for your quick work again! I always appreciate your corrections. Best regards,
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn it is better to say for comparison with.”
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn you say “ name embroidered.”
Dear Davit Thank you for the corrections. They are very helpful. Thank you for your message, too. You live in Vancouver! I hear Vancouver is a wonderful city. I want to visit there some day. I am not good at speaking and writing, so I started to keep a diary in English. Have a great day! Keiko23
