Dear Teacher David san Thank you for your kind corrections. I've understood that I used many words incorrectly. … Regarding enact "whether euthanasia should be enacted" I should have written: "a bill for permitting euthanasia should be enacted into law" … "It sounds more like you are suggesting that you believe this point because of your own personal religion" I fully understand what you wrote. I should have expressed "From the religious view point ." Frankly speaking, I tried to avoid wordiness, but in vain. … "I decided to say 'as euthanasia would be part of healthcare, the social systems, set by the government'" Thank you very much. You have kindly understood what I meant to say. … "it is currently not part of our systems because it isn't allowed." I understand I should be more logical, what is real, what is hypothetical. … We say that "(an overall thing) consists of (components)." I should have written: "euthanasia belongs to fundamental human right." … >"Should be appreciated" sounds more like you're talking about if people like these rights = I meant' highly estimated and respected and strictly protected. I just imitated a expression such as "Yen is appreciated". Besides above, thank you for your many nice corrections.
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am glad to learn the expression “ a chidden’s book.”
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Thank you for your super fast edition. I am glad to learn the expression “ the second most.”
Thank you for your message and advice. I will do my best next time to refer to these comments.
Dear Desiree Thank you for your kind message! Have a wonderful day!!
I'm appreciate your quick feedback, which gives me multiple useful options and proper grammar knowledge. I hope I can receive your informative guidance on the other essays. Thank you.
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am glad you reminded me of the verb phrase “ browse through.”
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am glad to learn you say “ a house party.”
Dear David, Thank you for reviewing my composition and lots of substitutions! I had a problem with the phrase of directions, so your explanation about RAKE will help me to understand it more. Have a great weekend! Best regards, Kohei
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am glad to learn the word “ milk fat.”
Dear teacher David Yes, my intention with "stocks." is " hiking sticks." eigoippoippo
Dear, David Thank you for reviewing. I lived in Toronto to study English for two and half years. In the winter, I needed to wear a jacket with a warm inner lining to go to NOFRILLS and Timmy’s :) About SO THAT, I can write these below, can’t I? ・I was so tired that I gave up to go there. ・I finished my work ealier so that I decided to join the party. ・My favorite band is going to come in Japan, so that I bought the ticket for the concert. Thank you always. Best regards, Kohei
Hi, David, You always give me perfect examples to help me understand the phrases you gave me in your review. Thank you always, I REALLY appreciate it! Best regards, Kohei
Good day David Thank you for your quick response. I read your corrections. I will do my best from now on. Gyu-tongue taste very good. So, I recommend you to eat it. Best regards Ryo
