Thank you for your feedback. You figured out what I wanted to mean in the second sentence! I learned from your explanation why my original sentence was vague. Thanks again!
Hello dear David, Thank you very much for correcting my composition. Your explanation was very clear and detailed as always. I didn't know ''trail walking'' and ''halfway of'' were the wrong phrasing ... Your example sentences are always helpfull for me to understand, too. I really hope you would give me your lesson next time, too. Thanks again, have a nice day!
Hello David, I've learned a new expression " has her arm around a boy's shoulders". Other corrections are also helpful. Thank you very much!
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am glad to learn it’s better to say “ …plug the helicopter into the controller” in the second sentence.
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am glad about your correction of my last sentence like “ a consonant should be written twice in a row when a words that ends with a consonant changes from the present tense into the past tense…”
I always thank you, David! I've learned a lot! I didn't know the way to use "their" instead of "his or her." How convenient! See you soon.
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am glad that my composition is almost perfect.
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am glad to learn “ the” is necessary before initiative like “ took the initiative” in the 4th sentence.
Thank you, David! I didn't come up wih the words""lantern even though it was a simple and familiar word. I'll keep working.
Thank you as always.
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am glad to learn it’s better to say “ categorize words by color” in the last sentence.
Dear teacher David san Thank you for your prompt corrections and your understandable answer which always comes back with a lot of exsamples. Referring to my question, now that I have understood the syntax, I can compose example sentences: "Now that her children are grown up, she wants to start working again." and then in order to reverse the meaning, "even now that her children are grown up, she wants to take care of them." What confused me was that I had made a false cutting line and then I had read the sentence with the break line between "now" and " that." I think that consistant in word using is important and find "handwriting or typed" to be inconsistent. I should correct to "handwriting or typing" ,which describes actions more clearly. I see, X affects Y, while X has an effect on Y. I was taken aback that: "Thinking" uncountable and a common expression: "get my thoughts in order" Best regards,
Thank you again, David! It was my first time to hear the word "inflatable pool." We call it "vinyl pool" in Japan. I've also learned that it is better not to omit a relative pronoun. I will request you soon.
Hello, David. How are you doing? I'm happy to hear from you again here. Thank you for the amendments you made on my essay. I'm flattered to read your nice comments. Your corrections all make perfect sense to me. I hope to see you soon again. Bye for now. Yoko
Thank you for your feedback and comments on how I can use each wording better!
