Thank you for your quick edtion. I am glad to know my last sentence sounded like the first sentence in a composition, so that you changed it into a sentence that sounded more like the last sentence in a composition.
Thank you for your quick edtion. I am glad to know “squeeze out” is better.
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Dear David, Than you for checking my writing and giving me feedback! Hope to see you soon! -Yuko
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Thank you for your quick edtion. I am glad to let me know “an unfamiliar area is better.”
Thank you for your quick edtion. I am glad to let me know the smoother and more common way to say : from my second to the last sentence.
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I appreciate your quick response. I got the correction clearly and I will make an effort to use English more naturally.
Thank you for your quick edtion. I am glad to learn the phrase” swim the crawl.”
Thank you for your quick edtion. I am sorry I misspelled “guild ” for guide”
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Hi David, Thank you for checking my writing! Regarding the " out there" part, your guess was correct. I tried to avoid the word " available " twice but it seems the word choice was not good... Thanks again!
Thank you for your quick edtion. I wonder why you used “ the past passive voice” in the last sentence.
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