Dear David, Thank you very much for your quick response. I am really grateful. I have never thought of using an infinitive instead of a clause! Thank you very much! Your advice is really helpful!
I am sorry for sending you stars on this composition this late! I always appreciate your kind and thorough corrections which give me a great opportunities to learn!
Dear David, Thank you very much for your corrections and comments again! Thank you for changing "that" to "those," which was very helpful. Also thank you for pointing out the tense in the second sentence!
Thank you as always!
Thank you for your correction and encouraging comments as always! Tenses are not easy when I try to "think" and get it right with grammar rules! Anyway, this composition turned out to be one of my favourites, just like that old picture book! Well, it's getting late in Tokyo, so I'll call it a day and write my English diary tomorrow :)
Thank you for your correction and encouraging comments! I will be careful with prepositions like "assignment for university." By the way, my assignments are sent by post while their lectures are provided online. I have not thought about it funny, that is funny!
Dear David, Thank you very much for your corrections and advice. Your advice on the article "the" was convincing. Also, I liked the expression "bring back my good memories." I learned important things this time too!
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am glad to lean “straw” should be in the plural like “straws.”
Dear David, Thank you very much for your corrections. Yes, the word "charades" is the exact word I wanted to say! I also liked the phrase, "the teenage years" Thank you!
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am glad to lean “painting” is in the singular.
David, Thank you so much for your advice! It helped me a lot! yoko
Dear David, Thank you very much for your corrections again! I am especially grateful that you pointed out the article! Articles are always difficult for me. Your advice is always very helpful!
Thank you for your super fast edition. times.I am glad to lean you say “tilt...to the opposite side.”
Thank you for your correction and useful tips! I'll try including "about" with sentences like this in my future writings.
Dear David, Thank you very much for your corrections again! I learned an important phrase talking about the board! I am very happy to learn about it. Thank you!
