

I will review word/phrase issues thoroughly. Thank you very much.

Dear SaraRoseNY, Thank you for correcting my writing and explaining. Have a nice day! Kind regards, wako38

It was very helpful to have a commentary on the social situation in the U.S. I will read it aloud again this time.

Thank you for your wonderful rewrite. I will review thoroughly.

I read aloud twenty times. I want to acquire this power of expression.

Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. I understand the importance for approaching global topics with sensitivity and balance to avoid inadvertently presenting views that are seen as critical. I wholly agree with the values of indigenous languages for preserving culture, identity, and community ties. So I should have written the explanation of its importance ahead of my opinion. Best regards 5971mak.

You have corrected my writing to be excellent. I read aloud twenty times. I want to acquire this power of expression.

Dear SaraRoseNY, Thank you for correcting my writing more naturally. You always help me a lot. I really appreciate it. I hope you have a great summer. Kind regards, wako38

Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards. 5971mak.

Thank you as always.

Thank you for your refined writing. I am reviewing while reading aloud. I will challenge various topics.

Thank you so much.

I didn't give enough consideration to the usage of pronouns. Thank you for pointing out. I will do my review.

Your expression perfectly expresses what I want to say and is a beautiful sentence. I will read aloud and review. Thank you very much.

Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards 5971mak.