Good morning, Sara! Thank you for your helpful advice! It's very difficult to write a English essay like native English writer. I'll do my best! See you soon. Best regards, Midori
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you corrections that are helpful to me. Thank you for questioning. I am glad to explain the current states regarding aquaculture and reckless fishermen at Oma who try catching an once-in-a-lifetime valuable catch. Aquaculture is implemented in a segregated part of ocean with large and tough nets so that fish have to live in the area. As fish breeder feed by spreading fish food into the sea, some amount of food becomes leftover that damages the quality of sea water. When the breeder is careless as for the damage, the fish breeding can cause sea water pollution. Therefore, monitoring of sea water quality is necessary to prevent the pollution. As far as water quality is maintained, the aquaculture is beneficial for both consumers and fisheries. As for the reckless fisherman, as you mentioned, catching fish and seafood in the frigid season is really dangerous. I don’t think the young hope to become the risky profession. When they can have alternative option to work in safe environment like in an office, many of them choose safer work. I think that those who don’t have certification are forced to choose risky fishery to earn big profit. TV programs broadcasts that the reckless fishermen are cool, I don’t think they are happy to continuing dangerous challenge for an once-in-a-lifetime valuable catch. I believe that television shows embellish their stories for ratings. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are useful to me. The weather forecast for this weekend is sunny, so we will be able to see a lot of beautiful fireworks. My whole family is looking forward to watch them. Best regards, 5971mak
Thank you very much! I can understand how to use a colon and a semicolon.
Dear SaraRoseNY, Thank you for the various feedback. Each one is very helpful to me. I'll submit my composition to you again. Regards, Taurus
Thank you for the helpful corrections.
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Hello SaraRoseNY, Thank you always for your corrections and comments. Your works are always so helpful. I really appreciate that. Best regards, Kohei
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Thank you very much for your comments. They are very helpful.
Thank you for the clear explanation!
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are useful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Dear SaraRoseNY, Thank you for your insightful advice and correction. I learned "early verb structure" many times in your corrections, but I couldn't write sentences in the way. I have to keep it in my mind. The words "voice" and "question" which you introduced are useful. I didn't use them as verbs so far. "Viability" is also new word for me. It can be useful to make sentence concise. I'll use these words in my English conversation class soon! Have a great Sunday!! Best regards, mkawa
