Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. I understand that I should write my thought from individual level to municipality level and federal level in order. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Dear SaraRoseNY, Thank you for correcting my writing again. I always learn a lot from you. I hope you have a great day. Kind regards, wako38
Dear SaraRoseNY, Thank you for correcting my writing again. I’m always thinking how I should write English in my diary. My brain is busier than before and I’m enjoying the habit. Kind regards, wako38
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Although group harmony is partially useful, individualism is also essential for self-reliance and self-esteem. A lack of labor in Japan will transform Japanese society into more indivisualized society, accepting more economic migrants who bring diverse culture into Japan. Best regards, 5971mak
Thank you so much.
I read aloud the revised entry today as well. Thank you very much.
Dear SaraRoseNY, Thank you for correcting my writing again! I’ll check the new words you’ve taught me immediately. It’s nice and sunny today. I hope you have a great day! Kind regards, wako38
Dear SaraRoseNY Thank you for your kind advice and correction. The phrases "challenging aspects to consider", and "based on the test results" are useful, and I will practice to use the phrases! Your expressions and suggestions are always amazing. I'd like to write compositions like yours!! Best regards, Mkawa
Thank you again for your excellent revision of my entry. I will read it aloud carefully.
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Dear SaraRoseNY, Thank you for correcting my writing again. All adults and children have trouble with relationships. I think doing things at your own pace is good for health. Kind regards, wako38
Dear SaraRoseNY, Thank you for correcting my writing and giving me kind words of encouragement. I think I’m going to buy a simple and stylish one by the end of this week! Have a nice day. Kind regards, wako38
Thank you for your feedback! It was easy to follow and helpful. I will try to use negative inversion in the future.