Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Dear SaraRoseNY Thank you for the corrections. I realized what I need to be careful, for example, I repeated a same adjective, If clause, and What the main point of the sentences are. Thank you very much. From Lavender
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. There is a common sense that the students, who have had international students who have had international education overseas, have difficulty getting along with Japanese students. Japanese students are instilled with a spirit of collective harmony by their families and teachers since their childhood. Insisting one’s own thoughts are not welcome because it may bother others. Japanese native children are persistently indoctrinated to practice self-repression and to do same behaviors as others do. Such disciplines resemble a kind of army training. Without acquiring such attitudes, residents frequently ignore the individuals who don’t follow the Japanese traditional custom. Therefore, it is necessary for the children who are educated abroad to enter special schools called as “international school” to learn the spirit of group harmony, continuous self-repression, and stop showing their opinions. As for the new Prime Minister Shigeru Ishiba, he is an honest, sincere, and patient person. However, in the Japanese politics, his character is not always welcome. He tried to debate controversial political issues regardless of negotiation in advance with partisan leaders. As a result, he unintentionally rebukes senior national lawmakers occasionally. Currently, the leader of the biggest faction in his political party dislikes the new Prime Minister. The partisan leader seems to interfere him even the leader belongs same political party as Mr. Ishiba. Mr. Ishiba is a reliable person but not good at making strategy and negotiation with other partisan leaders. As you may already know, yesterday, the new Prime minister mentioned to plan next general election in this month just after starting his cabinet. It is because he may have a lot of difficulty under his current circumstance due to retaliation by the biggest partisan of his political party. It is a mess and a waste of tax-payers’ money. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Since we have a custom that regard putting aside some amount of money in bank account as a good deed, it frequently lead to large amount while people avoid spending money. Most companies also same practice even though they earn large profit by moving production factories overseas. It is said that the average income of employees was not elevated for the last two decades. Nevertheless, we face the price hike, resulting more mindful of saving daily spendings. Small amount of people may suceed increasing their income while having special skills. However, many people are still struggling to have enough income which cause declining number of children because educational cost for children becomes expensive. This economic stagnation of Japan economy is one of the important reason why parents are reluctant to starting their families. Under such circumstances, people are forced to enduring with moderate and low-priced products nowadays. Although there are more expensive versions of products and high-brand items are available, I think that the number of people who can purchase the luxury goods are small number. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
I am so grateful for your highly detailed corrections. I try to substitute phrasal verb and hyphenated adjectives with single condensed words in order to make my writings seem more formal.
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. I would like to make my sentences concise and clear-cut expressions. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are useful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. As Japan is famous for fresh delicious seafood, it is common for shops and restaurants to hold live sashimi performances. Chefs entertain how fresh theye are, while chefs gradually cut fish to make fish excluciated on cutting board for around 10 minutes. Customers feel excited by wathing fish flouncing and believe that its tastes must be splended because they are just sloughtered in front of their eyes. Even though it is justifiable for customers to enjoy eating fresh seafood, the process of sloughter should be carried out in a way that causes as little suffering as possible. Best regards, 5971mak
Dear SaraRoseNY, Thank you for detailed correction and advice. I understood the importance of connecting two sentences to make them concise. The expressions, such as "have experience doing," "remain passive," and "monotonous" are new and helpful. I'm not good at making concise composition, but I'd like to practice more. I also appreciate your encouragement of my plan of welcoming guests. I will do my best at the event. Have a great weekend! Best regards, mkawa
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. I can feel a sense of achievements by learning new knowledge and skills so that I can raise my performance more. I would like to continue studying to make me better. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Thank you for correcting my essay! I thought utilizing the numbered format may seem immatured, but I will follow your advice as it can lead me easier to the clear structure. Your correction has given me a lot of motivation toward better writing. Again, I appreciate it to your help.
