Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. I increase my vocabulary with "a health-conscious lifestyle", "the wider public", "budget and space constraints", and "substitute discount coupons". Best regards, 5971mak
Thank you for your feedback. You pointed out the key revisions, which were quite helpful.
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Thank you, as always.
Hello, SaraRoseNY, How ave you been? It's nice to hear from you again. As i told you many times, I love reading your writings. An unexpected choice of word surprises me. You introduce me new words and new expressions which are entertaining enough to stimulate my English study . Even though my writing may make sense, I want to learn more than that. This time interesting points I learned are.... I didn't know "further" has a verb form, meaning "help something succeed or be achieved". ”To manage such selective and variable human thinking" You added this to make it logical. ”In fact, its great potential and future value are already patent, leading companies and tech experts to compete to achieve this goal.” PATENT" is a new word for me. I guess it's a adjective form meaning OBVIOUS See you next time, Bye until then. Yoko
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Thank you very much for your detailed feedback. I try to avoid choppiness!
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Thank you for kind words regarding Japan's economic situation. Unfortunately, no positive news has arrived yet; nevertheless, the Japanese government are reluctant to taking drastic actions such as more globalization. It is urgent for Japan to accept diversity and more economic migrants that are essential for sustaining our society in these days. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are useful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are useful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are useful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Unfortunately, the junior college for computer skills was not popular because most computer-related companies are in major cities. After the disappearance of the school, our regional local government established a four-year university for narsing and care giving. Since Noto peninsulae has been facing aging issues, the university succeeds in attracting many high school students. I don't think that the school will struggle against a lack of young applicants. Year after year, enrollment rate of the school has kept perfect and competition of its entrance examination becomes hard due to popularity. The graduaters of the university is expexted to get jobs at local medical facilities, nurshing homes, and public health centers. It is a kind of win-win relationship between the young and local businesses through the community-oriented university. Best regards, 5971mak
