Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Dear SaraRoseNY, Thank you for proofreading my writing. The new expressions, such as "upcoming", "get-together", and "feel included" are so helpful!!! I'm planning to use these phrases in my next conversation class!! I really appreciate that you corrected my writing even though you had not much time. Have a great weekend! Best regards, Mkawa
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
a departure from, my taste buds, and reserved are really cool expressions. You have taught me a lot of great expressions this time as well. I will review them carefully.
Dear SaraRoseNY, Thank you for correcting my writing again. I’m looking forward to seeing you again next year! I really enjoyed this year with you! Have a nice day. Kind regards, wako38
Thank you very much for correcting my awkward entry. I really do agree with you when I read it aloud. I will review it thoroughly. Thank you very much.
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Dear SaraRoseNY, Thank you for correcting my writing again. Your corrections always help me, and your comments cheer me up every time. I’ll focus on reviewing my diaries that you corrected for me for a while, but I’d like to continue writing diaries at my own pace. Thank you very much. Kind regards, wako38
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best Regards, 5971mak
Dear SaraRoseNY, Thank you for your advice and messages! I'm so delighted to read them!! The words that you introduced to me, such as "harshly", "well-organized", "importantly", "refrain from", "highlight", and "foster" are so helpful. And I am so happy because you agreed with my thought. I'll write another composition soon. Have a good week!! Best regards, Mkawa
Dear SaraRoseNY, Thank you for correcting my writing again! Have a nice day. Kind regards, wako38
I think your revised text makes the reader want to read the next sentence as soon as possible. Great expression.