Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are useful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. I will review your correction; Google is regulated by anti-monopoly law enforcing anti-monopoly law At the Internet dawn Back then Google becoming an influential and big company the company grew into an influential behemoth the chrome becomes now the most widespread Android OS Chrome has become firmly integrated into Android phones This commercial manner The company's manipulative approach To improve this condition of search engines, competition would be necessary. This monopolistic situation certainly necessitates the promotion of similar competitors in the market. instead of setting chrome apps on smartphones in advance, provision of kick-back to makers must have been a kind of bribery. incentivizing Google apps as defaults is quite akin to bribery. create healthy competition among android OS apps. creates a healthier coexistence of Android apps. your corrections are very informative for me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Yes, I agree that current internet circumstances may be a lawless world under the name of freedom of speech. There are a lot of misinformation like falsification, biased judgements, manipulative contents, and demagogues. Current penal laws have limitation to penalize those who cheat users even though websites texts are fishy and unbelievable. I believe that governments should urge internet providers to establish a third-party organization to reduce harm of the Internet. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. I agree that I was happy when I was a child because I was used to play with my friends afterschool. At that time, it is common for us to play baseball and soccer at a local park. Since even mobile phones was not available, when we want to have a fun time, playing sports with my neighbors was usual choice. While playing, we talked a lot and laughed together. In contrast, current kids are generally wealthy but they have few time to play with sports at a community park. Seeing popularity of smartphones among young demographics, I am afraid that they may have difficulty making comoradarie with their friends as a result of less face-to-face communication. I was surprised that my younger son, who is one of digital generation, gathered at my house to play with his classmates. Seating at the dinning table in living room of my house, they were silently playing roll-playing game with their smartphones and occasionally chatting simple words like "cool", "nice", "Wao", "busters", and so on. Was it a communication? Although they could have a fun time in cyberspace through their digital gadgets, I seriously felt anxiety as they might have miscommunication in their future. Face-to-face communication is one of the essentials to live with neighbors, friends, and strangers. Schools, teachers, and adults including me should instill the importance of direct communication in the young. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Yes, tourism-driven price hikes has become common in many travel destinations. Our place, Kanazawa, is also one of such places as we can see drastic price elevation at Omicho market that was regarded as a local market for residents in the past. After bulett trains Has been established, the number of travelers has skyrocketed and it raised the price tags. Since visitors frequently don't care their spendings during travelling, elevation of the prices alienated locals from shopping at the familiar market. I reminisce about sceans where residents gulvanized the local glocery stores at the market. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
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Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Your explanation from Miss Hibari Misora case to opposition to recreate lifelike videos is very persuasive, making my essay very smooth flow of sentences. Current advances of a generative AI are unbelievable as the artificial images and sounds are like a real human. While watching AI Hibari on TV, I felt that it is difficult to distinct with her real presence. Although the development can be both bliss and harm, it is indispensable for us to utilize it wisely. As long as evolution of new technologies is beneficial for us, AI can be an essential part of our depopulating society. Many of the elderly will need help and support by AI technologies to continue living at their homes. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. I will review your correction with logical sentences. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. I review your corrections carefully to raise my writting skill. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. I don't think that 100% cashless is a practical option because many elementaly school students and elderly are not familiar with smartphones. As a result, they may be alienated to visit the Osaka World Expo even though pre-paid cashcards are available. Given the convenience for those who don't use digital gear, the organizing committee should prepare real cash payment as well. According to a governmental survey, cashless payments reaches around 45% and the rest still needs real cash. Cashless payments only may cause dissatisfaction among visitors. Some of them may feel irritated and oppressed by a lack of real cash payment option. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Although I tried to write expressions of affirmative wording, it is common for me to write negation sentences that are common in Japanese expressions. However, I would be familiar with English expressions because I want to be a proficent in English. I review your polite and kind corrections to hone my writing skill. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are useful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are useful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
