Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. In my view, a lack of literacy skill has become a serious social issue as the reclusive become common in Japan nowadays. Many of them are said to have a problem to learn subjects despite of high school graduation. As smartphone has greatly increased, the young relying on their digital tools too much. As a result, they may lose acquiring essential capabities like communication, literacy, arithmetics, and a lack of resilience. In order to improve current situation of the young, schools should mandate Japanese proficiency test to students so that they can be aware of a lack of literacy in Japanese. As for "scalping", such behavior is now rampant to earn money from innocent individuals. The Japanese government should make a law to protect citizens from the predator. If users accessed online shopping sites like mercari, the company could require the users to upload their ID card such as driver licenses. This decision can expel the greedy scalpers to make the websites peaceful for innocent customers. The internet is very convenient and enjoyable, but anonymity is still a source of troubles and crimes. More regulations should be implemented to secure safety among users. Best regards, 5971mak
Thank you for your helpful comment. I am looking forward to taking your lesson again.
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. I totally agree that smartphone overuse can harm both students intelligence and physical health. Basically, smartphone screens are so small that users will have eye problems, neck injuries, a lack of concentration for assignments, and mental obsession of online communication. I am dubious why health authority gives warnings and caustions regarding smartphone abuse. Daily convinience may be comfortable in daily life, but its long-term overuse can cause serious troubles to them. Parents and educators should provide how to get along with the excitement and pleasure while focusing on screens to the users. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. As for the retaliatory tariff, Minister Akazawa, who is the representative of the Japanese government, never tried negotiating against President Trumpt's decision. Our government has always proposed a variety of investments to create more jobs for American residents. In return, Akazawa expects that President trump cut the rate for Japan. I don't think that he try negotiating, but he flatter by showing profit for the U.S. Japan is still a loyal subordinate to the U.S. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are useful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. I review your corrections to make my writting skill better. Your instructions are always informative and educational to express my thought in English. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. As more children enroll colleges, many adults take it for granted that graduators must be equipped with communication skill, decorum, and propriety. However, such view is one-sided judgement and doesn’t reflect their real state. While having more convenience thanks to their smartphones, their face-to-face interaction needs more support and advices after start working. To become an employee who can contribute to their workplaces, their bosses and colleagues should instruct decent direct communication skill to the young. Such instruction would reduce anxiety, panic disorders, and social phobia among young employees. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are useful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. In my view, not only parents’ discipline but also school education are critical to educate Japanese citizens to be tidy and keep making public places clean. Every school day, students are forced to clean their classroom after lunch to maintain clean environment. Such daily routines can foster them to acquire a good deed not to scatter trash, rubbish, and other items. Japanese people loving to be clean must be raised through the period of elementary school. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are useful to me. Although the crisis brought us not only sadness but also the importance of our family tie, I think that she had to be unhappy. As she was a nutricianist who had worked at a hospital before having given a birth, she hoped to work again after finishing our child care. However, her will never came true due to her blindness. She often looked back the days when working again and again with a lot of sorrow. Regardless of gender, everyone should be allowed to have a job if one wants to work. Best regards, 5971mak
Dear SaraRoseNY, Thank you always for your kind assist. The corrections I received this time were particularly difficult, and I was painfully aware of my lack of vocabulary for abstract and artistic terms. Thank you for always being patient with my English. Have a nice day! Best regards, MaiT
Dear SaraRoseNY, Thank you always your kind assist. Now I understand the meaning of "homepage" in other culture, thank you for letting me know. And as you understood, we created some Katakanas, for example "baby car"instead of stroller, so I will be more careful. Have a nice week! Best regards, MaiT
Dear SaraRoseNY Thank you always for your kind support. I fully agreed your description of "children were indisputably future assets", I expect our goverment truly understand this importance and take immediate action for resolve the root causes of declining birth rate. Thank you again and have a nice week! Best regards, MaiT
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are useful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are useful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
