

Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Medicine and medical procedures are not always safe and they could harm consumer's health obviously. Nevertheless, since the industly is not strictly restlicted, profit-dirven situations could become dangerous to the innocent users. I think that standing by and watching such situation would constitute intentional neglect. Best regards, 5971mak

Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corections that are helpful to me. Due to a custom of collective harmony, there was a strong pressure to force drinking gatherings and parties over workers. While Japanese demographic ages, health promotion becomes more critical year after year. Thus, our society has ro become transforming for acceptance of individual preference regarding alcohol beverages. This change is a great step to stop acute alcohol poisoning. Best regards, 5971mak

Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Under cost cutting working situations, workers are frequently forced to work hard and quickly. In particular, as companies introduces computers with AI, they have to get along with the advances. As a result, they may be excessively keeping elevated tensions during their working hours. Daily stress relief must be necessary to reduce their working stress nowadays. Best regards, 5971mak

Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak

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Dear Sara, Thank you for your support. I was able to notice many things through your teaching! I will send you questions in a different form. I sincerely appreciate it. Koh.

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Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Yes, I prefer having Pacific saury dishes such as raw fish, sushi, and grilled ones. Because of its delicious taste, these dishes can give me a happy time to eat. In addition, the fish is only available in autumn and its limited-time dishes can boost the happiness since we can enjoy the taste only in the limited duration. Best regards, 5971mak

Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak

Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak

Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak

Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak

Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak

Thank you for your feedback with suggestions for more natural sentences! They are helpful to improve my writing skill.

Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak