

Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. I understand that my sentences lacks smooth flow of context. I will pay attention to the connection of my thought while focusing on the topic. Best regards, 5971mak

Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak

Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak

Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak

Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. I should have paid attention to the connection between first part and second part. I will focus on the flow of my thoughts that should be natural. Best Regards, 5971mak

Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak

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Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak

Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak

Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. I understand that my context was not coherent. I should heva mentioned the connection between a programming skill and the mystery of mindness, particularly understanding and empathy. Even if AI has evolved by machine learning and deep learning, the computers will have difficulty understanding such move of emotions that are still not wholly revealed. Neverthe less, we are surrouded by a lot of computers in daily life. Due to ubiquity of computers in society, children will live with digital world. Thus they should have a programming skill to have prosperous future by making machines obey. Best regards, 5971mak

Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak

Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak

Dear SaraRoseNY, Thank you for your thoughtful words. Your message encouraged and empowered me. The effectiveness of Chinese medicines for your symptom long time ago was really good for you, and valuable information for me. In this writing lesson, I learned important techniques, such as omitting obvious words, how to use the present perfect continuous, putting adjectives after "-thing," and neurologist! I've come to realize again how enjoyable writing in English and reading your correction. Thank you so much again. Warmest regards, mkawa

Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak

Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak