TeacherSaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
TeacherSaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
TeacherSaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Depopulation in rural areas are already searious issue nowadays. Many municipalities are facing exodus of the young. To stop depopuation, governments should raise minimum wages to make the young remain in their hometown. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are useful to me. Currently, due to a lack of young labor, transportation, logistics, retail shops, and the police are struggling to attract young applicants. It is essentital for the organizations to increase more benefits with freedom for the young. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for collections that are helpful to me. It is latter half of August when it was used to start declining temperature in the past. However, in this year, surrounding circumstance is clearly different from usual condition. Temperature outside is still keeping scorching heat and occasional torrential rain bombards us. Today's weather forecast announced that we will have sweltering days in these two weeks with occasional heavy rain. I was dumbfounded by such unusual condition. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Given the development of information technolog, continuing to learn while working has become a routine for me nowadays. I believe that the ability to keep learning is becoming one of the essential skills for working. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Although collective harmony can be useful in elevating working performance as a team, individual needs and personal wishes are essential for one's happiness. Current workplace culture shoud evolve for accepting more individualism in Japan. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. I know one very famous Japanese singer who is well-known in the U.S. as well. She is now sixty-four years old that belongs to age of an elderly. However, few wrinkle appears on her face that is quite eerie compared with general standard looks of her age group. Although she never agree with that she took plastic surgery, it is obvious for her to implement cosmetic treatments for maintaining young face. Since her beauty face is too artificial, I disagree that her outlook in natural. It is painful to watch her trying too hard to look young. Her name is Seiko Matsuda. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Your revision is well-organized, easy to understand, and pursuasive. I will review your corrections. Thank you very much. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
The feedback was very courteous, and the suggested improvements and alternative expressions were clearly explained with reasons, which made it highly instructive.
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Recently, large-scale studies from around the world have shown a tendency for people who continue to perform household chores to have higher cognitive function and a lower risk of developing dementia. Having household tasks may be more indispensable than we expected. Best regards, 5971mak
