Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. I agree that typhoons has become stronger than before year after year. The intensity of them are obviously elevating as global warming deteriorates. I am afraid of more damages occurring in wider refions in Japan. Best regards, 5971mak
Hello, SaraRoseNY, How are you? I love the corrections you give me on my submission. This time I learned many new words and expressions from you, thank you. The last two sentences I sent you seem like they didn't make sense to you. ・Preserving discipline is a must for anybody. The ability to maintain discipline is essential for athletes, as it's the foundation of their success. ・ She was an Olympian who represents many Japanese athletes thereby I would say she deserved to receive heavier punishment. As an Olympian representing many Japanese athletes, it's reasonable to argue that she deserved a more severe punishment. I like the idea that you wrote to correct my paragraph. Just what I meant to say was that discipline is essential for people including Olympic athletes, and as she is an Olympian she must have deserved such punishments that were heavier than usual people would receive in this situation. Take care, and see you next time. Yoko
Thank you very much! I can understand the difference between "store" and "shop."
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. I understand my conclusion was ambivalent and not suitable in this topic. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Thank you very much. I can understand how to use "well-being."
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are useful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Thank you for your kind explanation. it is helpful for me.
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. I am impressed with the last sentence you added. As depopulation has become a common serious issue, many municipal governments have troubles to maintain their communities. While having a lot of elderly residents, they lose a lot of young people who move to urban areas with blush offices in sleek and cool buildings. Although we don't have effective solution yet, more should be done to help the elderly and the young in rural areas. Best regards, 5971mak
Dear SaraRoseNY, Thank you for your corrections! Sorry for the late replay! Best regards, Midori
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. I agree that dangers of food additives in lunch packs of convenience stores. Since food preservatives and emulsifiers contain a variety of chemicals, it is difficult for consumers to understand long-term effects of the chemicals. Although short and limited consumption of the food additives, it is said that the chemicals are safe. Consumers should be wise enough to practice home cooking in daily life and utilize convenience store products in some busy time. As far as people consume lunch packs intermittently, convenience store food is useful for consumers. Home cooking is the best option, but it is not always practical in busy days. Best regards, 5971mak
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Thank you for explaining the details and I understand your helpful advices. I’m glad to know proper and natural phrases and I want to keep knowing more native natural English.
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Getting married is a big event in life, and it is difficult for everyone to devorce and remarry. In particular, they already have their infants, a negative repercussion of separation will be serious to them. As long as they have realistic expectations, dating apps will be effective tools. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Rapidly aging society has become a serious threat, so health promotion is now the most important thing for not only individuals but also companies that shoulder medical expenses of workers through public health system in Japan. Best regards, 5971mak
