Thank you for always changing my sentences into beautiful passages!
Thank you, as always.
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Yes, as you mentioned, many elementary school teachers emphasize the importance of acquiring Japanese literacy at first due to difficulty learning Japanese language. They frequently say that having English classes may cause confusion over children and as a result their Japanese literacy may weaken. So children should focus on Japanese at first because it is a mother language. However, as a result of such education policy, most of Japanese worker have been struggling in working abroad. For Example, Mr, Shohei Otani, who is one of the greatest athletes, still needs translator to communicate with his team mate. Although he became speaking simple English sentences, he has difficulty expressing his thoughts and opinions. Teachers should see his poor situation and be awake to change their thoughts which can fit current world for the young. Many of them are forced to work in foreign countries, nevertheless they may lose self-confidence due to poor conversation skill in English and eventually give up working. Given the importance of ongoing globalization, even if Japanese literacy may need more school years like junior high school to get proficiency of Japanese language, English should begin at the age three in preschool. Who can accept difficult and disappointed future when they go abroad for work? Everybody earnestly hope work well regardless places and languages. English proficiency has become one of the essential skills for children’s bright future nowadays. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teaqcher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. I agree with the usefulness of online application regarding municipal offices. As Japan is facing a lack of budget, local governments implement more and more online communication to save the costs of documentation work and stamps. Such change is helpful for us to save time and money for visiting municipal offices. More and more emails supersede letters except for the case in which one requests publishing documentation with letter. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are useful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are useful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are useful to me. I understand the importance to avoid logical essay from “crowded” with repeatedly mentioning the person reference. As you corrected my sentence, I would like to replace the known doers. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Since the value of yen is expected to drop unfortunately, traveling overseas will be one of the luxurious things for many. Unlike special occasions such as honeymoon travel and 30th wedding memorial travel, they will opt for closer, freer, and palatable domestic travels. As for “We agree to disagree”, the idea is not common yet in Japan and collective harmony is one of the mandates in our society. While keeping a sense of peaceful atmosphere among citizens regardless of individuals’thoughts, diversity should be accepted to raise a sense of happiness because everyone can have their own thoughts and beliefs. I believe that a lack of tolerance against diversity is one of the primary causes of the social withdrawal in Japan. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. I understand that I misunderstand the question, so I write the same topic again. Tomorrow, I re-write it tomorrow. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. I will review your correction to be able to write persuasive sentences like your sentences. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. I will review your correction more in detail to raise my writing skill. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
