Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. I review your corrections to confirm my logical mistakes. Thank you very much. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Yes, the "digital coercion" frequently makes me feel annoyed because it forces me to use smartphones. Reading small scripts is very stressful for me, so I occasionally give up using apps that I tried to utilize. Small screen, as it is, can cause discrimination to the elderly who have vision troubles. Authorities should regularly prepare non-digital option to help them in public services. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Given the current office environment that keeps windows shut, 24-hour continuous ventilation air system is essential for better air quality. As long as the office air is clean enough to help workers strive their tasks, companies can maintain high work-efficiency. Thus, companies should monitor CO2 level and emit it from offices. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. There are eleven adjectives as follows, punitive, disruptive, exaggerated, significant, sensationalized, elusive, foreseeable, leniency, downright, problematic, similar. I review these words for next writing. Thank you very much. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Yes, many of the young hesitate to having face-to-face communication nowadays. They frequently require drafts documents or memo pads when they talk their colleagues and superiors. Instead, they heavily rely on SNS chatting to have frank conversation with their friends. Smartphone abuse becomes a concern in Japan as well. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
