Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpfulto me. I am sorry for choosing wrong essay title. Today's essay is for 16157 domestic product food. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are useful to me. Since living alone is a difficult time, dogs can help us live healthy and enjoyable. Unlike other animals, they seem to share our feeling through interaction. Best regards, 5971mak
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Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. I see. I should have mentioned the reasons more in detail to support my opinion. The psyche works are indispensable part of human life. Best regards, 5971mak
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Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Personaly, health authorities should examine long-term effects of additives ahead of patients' report with health issues. As colon cancer in the young has become a real concern, new chemicals should be checked to prevent unexpected consequences. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. I agree with giraffes' environmental adaptation to survive in their dangerous wild. Evolutionary changes of them make me feel surprised how their brains chenged. I think studying animal biology could contribute to human health by revealing mysteries. Best regards, 5971mak
TeacherSaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. I understand that I should have mentioned the conclusion regarding the passage. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Still, although some people believe traditional gender roles, the Japanese government should notify them the danger of one breadwinner in a household. Given the importance of upcomming financial crisis in Japan, I strongly support to elevate female empowerment to create a prosperous society. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Since processes of generative AI are invisable for users, it is difficult for users to check how the AI creates documents, novel information, and new advances. Due to a lack of inspecting the processes, unexpected results may happen unintentionally. Human monitoring is indispensable to deter the dangers of generative AI. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. As online threats have become obvious more than ever, these three key measures should be encouraged by both users and governments to combat malicious activities in the internet. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. As societies has become globalized, we can have more convenient and lucrative environment than ever. However, as a result of internalization, workers are forced to compete by having more advantages and skills. Thus, schools should introduce real atmosphere of a variety of businesses to raise awareness of learners with strong motivation. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Just as with the ratings given to staff by customers, I wish companies' HR department implements the ratings given to superiors by workers. Having collabolative atmosphere would be indispensable for high-productivity. Thus, "fukihara" should be eradicated as much as possible in workplaces. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. I think that lawyers who continue to provide irresponsible legal explanations should quit. Their actions only serve to complicate the resolution of a case and create further confusion. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. As increasing burdens of families' spendings become obvious, more and more families choose private funeral style where only family and relatives participate in ceremony nowadays. Due to difficulty in managing the ceremonies and burial graves, grave-closing seems to common in Japan. Best regards, 5971mak
