Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. In my opinion, AI-powered robots can become useful assistants for scientists and pharmaceutical companies. Currently, due to rapid aging society, a lot of countries have been struggling in allocating the budgets for medical services. As today's lesson illustrates, human/AI coexistence can contribute to making medical services affordable for more patients. As Nobel laureate Professor Shinya Yamanaka says, medical services should be available for everybody. Therefore, I totally agree with the collaboration between humans and AI robots. Best regards, 5971mak
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Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Personally, I don't demand wonderful meals which are high calories, but I wish comfortable air travel. Thus, even paying an optional charge, I would like to choose "Economy Skynest" a sleeping pod. This rest option can provide relaxing ambience and a safer environment that decrease economy class syndrome. Best regards, 5971mak
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Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are useful to me. I regularly limit the amount of coffee until three cups a day because excessive caffeine may cause stomach ache, insomnia, and mild headache to me. In case of morning coffee and after lunch dose, I prefer Starbucks type coffee due to strong taste and bitter. On the other hand, as regards an afternoon break and night dose, American type coffee is good for me to reduce stress. Particularly, when I want to drink a cup of java at night, I always have a cup of decaffeinated one. Except for the caffeinated drinks, sparkling water can help me refresh when I feel lethargy. Therefore, I regularly drink a cup of coffee and sparkling water to decrease a sense of exhaustion. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. I understand with the importance of practicing concise expression for my opinion. I review your corrections that are impressive and well-organized passage. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Due to scorching days, many Japanese citizens bring a handheld fun and a parasol nowadays. These items are now essential to stay in good health during summer in Japan. On the other hand, foreign travelers frequently don't take these countermeasures. To alleviate sweltering heat atmosphere, Kyoto station started spraying water mist to cool down visitors at central bus stop station in front of there. When people are crowded, this spraying mist can be effective to those who don't take actions. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Since many addictive beverage companies and processed food shops, a number of customers indulge these delicious flavors and tastes that are difficulty of self-repression. Continuous and repeated notification would be necessary to prevent malnutrition and poor diet. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. According to notification sites of Minato Ward, English classes at kindergartens have been expanded as the new style which provides the communication class every other day by native English speakers in this fiscal year. Through daily English conversation, the local authority expects children grow their English communication skill from the early age. As for excursion trip for Singapore, since the travel cost was too expensive last year, the local governments didn’t decide to continue it yet. As some people argue that such high cost may bring widening disparity between children because only rich families can allow children to participate in the special programs. Although the price of the program should be reasonable like home-stay trips, I hope that the Ward would continue the program. The opportunity visiting English spoken nations can bring a variety of culture shock to kindergarten children, which become a strong motivation to learn English by themselves. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. In my view, a serious reduction of offices clearly drove female students to big cities for better employment. As a result, many countryside regions are occupied by elderly parents with middle-age sons. To solve a lack of brides, neighborhood associations and local authorities held traveling abroad for the unmarried men to meet foreign local women through arranged marriage party. As the state of unmarried women shortage doesn’t change, the international marriage is important opportunities to get married. On the other hand, some people argue that such travel finding a partner is some kind of maidservant trade due to limited mutual understanding. Many Japanese host families expect the female partners to focus on giving birth and looking after husband’s elderly parents. As long as the wives are obedient, they are recognized as a member of the family. While globalization by the international marriage goes on because few Japanese girls in rural areas, local authority should strive elevating diversity and tolerance for acceptance of newlyweds from abroad. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are useful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
