Dear SaraRoseNY, Thank you always for your kind assist. I was always surprised by your revise with keep my message but modify it more natural and reader friendly. Wishing you a nice weekend! Best regards, MaiT
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. I will keep it in mind to specify my reasons with "first", "second" and "third". Best regards, 5971mak
Dear SaraRoseNY, Thank you always for your kind assist for my practices. It goes without saying that the most important thing in communication is to have the passion to convey something to the other person. I wanted to share this topic with you, and it made me take it even more seriously than usual. Recently, at work, I've been using Generative AI a lot for my English presentation manuscripts, it is helpful but I feel I need to reconsider this method to convey my feelings to the audience.
Dear SaraRoseNY, Thank you always your kind assist. Thorough this session, I learned "It goes without saying that.." and try to use it my furute writing. As you say, Japan is an island nation and it may allow us unique and different approach from other continental countries. Wishing you a nice week ahead! Best regards, MaiT
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are useful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. These days, cafe shops generally take first and second option but third option is not commonly implemented. In many cases, as long as possible, two clerks listen to customer requests so that shops hope situations will be improved. While a clerk stop handling customers alone, shops hope that customers will be aware of their rude behavior. However, customer harassment has become a real concern, the number of in-door monitoring cameras has been increasing such as McDonald's, 24/7 restaurants, and internet cafe shops to prevent crimes. Along the elevation of customer's violence, unfortunately I think that it is essential for restaurants and cafes to introduce monitoring cameras. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are useful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Looking at my sons, I'm worried that although Chat GPT is convenient, it will discourage them from writing sentences. Best regards, 5971mak
Dear SaraRoseNY, You gave me many interesting wordings. "make a world of difference" ' a world of ' may be.... emphasizing 'difference', isn't it? 'plush environment' is nice expression. 'a touch of luxury' is exactly what I wanted to say. The last line, "So, I would appreciate having a little extra money that can potentially solve problems and get me out of difficult situations.". you change that into a precise and more understandable one. The train I got on the other day had two green cars where all seats are reserved among 10 cars. Green car requires a green car ticket. You call this kind of ticket "a special reserved ticket". Thank you so much for all. Take care and see you soon. Yoko
I appreciate your feedback. Your explanations were easy to understand.
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. The way you corrected is very gentle and thoughtful, so those who are addicted to smartphones can listen to such advice, and it's very useful expression for me. Best regards, 5971mak
