Dear Sara RoseNY, Thank you for your kind advice. Your encouragement always uplifts my spirit. I learnt the necessity and effect of glue words. And I'll try to use words that you recommended me such as "explore" and "issue" in my next composition. By the way, I'd like to apologize for very short message when I send my composition. I really wanted to submit my writing to you as soon as possible at that time!! I will send another composition soon! Best regards, Mkawa
Dear SaraRoseNY, Thank you for correcting my writing again. It’s really nice weather today. Have a nice day! Kind regards, wako38
Dear SaraRoseNY, Thank you for correcting my writing again. Hope you have a wonderful day. Kind regards, wako38
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Thank you for your help! I look forward to take your proofreading again.
I think your choice of words is really great. It is very helpful.
Each sentence you modified gives me a clear image of the scene. It is very helpful for me.
Dear SaraRoseNY, Thank you for correcting my writing again. You always help me. I’ll try to keep writing my English diary for now. Kind regards, wako38
Dear SaraRoseNY, Thank you for correcting my writing again. I’ll keep studying English to go to London! Have a nice day. Kind regards, wako38
When I compare my own sentences with the corrected sentences, I still think my sentences are awkward. I will review carefully. Thank you very much.
You have introduced many expressions that I can use at work. I would like to review them thoroughly. Thank you very much.
I really appreciate the introduction of many interesting expressions such as find their way into, form a trail in, the linger pain, and deal with. This is my textbook.
Thank you again for your guidance on my entry.
Dear SaraRoseNY, Thank you for correcting my writing again. I really enjoyed the zoo! You should go there if you have a chance! I hope you have a nice day. Kind regards, wako38
Once again, my entry was very nice, thanks to your additions and corrections. Thank you very much.
