Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. I understand that I should have reduced the words that are clear in sentences and stayed in a neutral position to write essays. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. I understand that I should have briefly mentioned the importance of eye health at first. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are useful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Thank you for your feedback and suggestions to improve my sentences simpler and more concise!
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are useful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Thank you very much. Your supplementary explanation is very helpful!
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Thank you very much. I'll try not to add a verb at the end position.
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Although "filial piety" is still one of the good deeds in Japan, it becomes difficult for adults to put the custom in practice for their elderly parents. No effective solution has been developed yet. The Japanese government and we should tackle to improve the circumstances of the elderly. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. As the lawyer you talked with mentioned, the Japanese government strongly maintain the traditional idea of a family system in Japan. While Japanese society has gradually transformed to allow diversity, the old idea is surprisingly tough as international marriage has a lot of processes to do. Even in case of getting a marriage permission from the Japanese government, spouse residential visas might not published which led the spouses to go back their countries. The Japanese government still protect traditional view regarding a family system with marriages. As far as Japanese citizens follow the traditional view and customs, we can deserve to have a variety of supports from the government. Globalization with accepting economic migrants in Japan, the obsolete idea would fade out little by little. Although a spirit of collective harmony is useful, individualism should be spread to raise more happiness to children. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Japan is a country that is prone to earthquakes, with magnitude 7 earthquakes occurring every year. Earthquake prediction is still difficult to practice, but technology to reduce earthquake damage has made great strides. Nowadays, when building a house in Japan, it is mandatory to design it to prevent an earthquake damage. I hope that earthquake prediction will be further developed. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Dear Sara, Thank you for your helpful corrections! I'll keep writing! Have a great weekdnd! Best regards, Midori
