

Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. In my view, although vegitalians are common somewhat, the number of people who prefer "Vaganism" is still limited in Japan. I think that melty Wagyu beef, locally specialized delicious pork, and richy flavored chiken are the reason why vegetalians also occasionally enjoy eating meat. As long as such palatable meat is available, people would opt for being a vegetalian. Best regards, 5971mak

Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are useful to me. Best regards, 5971mak

Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak

Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. As long as I can keep my brain sound, I am willing to learning English. Daily English practice has provided me of higher productivity so far, so I would like to thrive self-growth. Best regards, 5971mak

Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak

Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. AI can be helpful tools as long as we utilize the technology wisely, such as driverless vehicle, automatic monitoring in public places, and suspected fugitive vehicle pursuit of the police. On the other hand, easiness and comfortableness of AI may lead to overdependence and abuse. Thus, I believe that users should pay attention to such hazards. Best regards, 5971mak

Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are useful to me. Best regards, 5971mak

Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Since the number of isolated adolescents and young adults has increased, their parents are confused but have difficulty in solving their struggling conditions. As simple factory work has been relocated abroad, it is common for the young to have a variety of skills if they earn high wages. While failing to acquire such professional techniques, they may lose self-confidence and confined themselves in their rooms. I think that they need rehabilitation programs with regaining independence and having vocational training. The Japanese government should allocate the budgets helping them restart their productive lives. Best regards, 5971mak

Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. I have understood what you want to mean regarding expats. Although your suggestion is reasonable, I meant that it is very difficult to practice in Japanese medias. Since the medial always pay attention to their popularity, staff strictly restrict straight comments that may watchers and listeners get angry. Under such circumstance, talentos are hesitate to mention the distinct aspects of Japanese culture, instead beautify the unique behaviors of Japanese to earn likeability. Best regards, 5971mak

Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Yes, I agree with that the Japanese-speaking expats/"tarentos" mention the unique aspects of Japanese culture. However, Japanese medias are hesitant to mentioning the specific things due to a threat of losing popularity. It is because Japanese medias always regard our custom and traditions as virtues, so consequently many Japanese misbelieve that foreigners take the implicit traditional rules for respectable deeds. This is a obvious gap between foreigners and Japanese residents, resulting in misunderstanding. Although Japanese undocumented social promises may be a distinct culture, the media should mention how Japanese society is a closed and exclusive society. I believe that the Japanese government should encourage students to participate in travel guide volunteers which provide interection between foreign visitors and Japanese. While the interection elevates more, diversification and acceptance of differences can be expanded. Best regards, 5971mak

Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Yes, I review corrections carefully to brush up my writting skill. Best regards, 5971mak

Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak

Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak

Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for correction that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak

Dear SaraRoseNY, Thank you very much for your detailed corrections. I’m sorry I couldn’t send my feedback earlier. Your explanation of how to use psychological verbs was extremely helpful. I also appreciate your repeated recommendation of “due to”. I’ll make an effort to use it from now on. The techniques you taught me, using a concise main subject and adding the “-er” suffix, were also very useful for writing more clearly. I’ll write another journal soon. Thank you again, and I hope you have a wonderful week. Best regards, mkawa