Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. I reviewed the usage of replace not to make a mistake again. Thank you for kind instruction. Best Regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Absolutely, a rapid increase of the elderly is already a serious issue such as elderly people living alone. While their children live in distant urban regions for their work, many of them tend to feel isolated. Although community centers provide them with activities of hobbies and gatherings, fragile elderly residents frequently avoid participating in these activities. Since public nursing care is available, this service should cover them who always stay at home. By utilizing community centers and the care-giving services, supports and aids should be provided to help elderly citizens reduce a sense of loneliness. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are useful to me. Due to expansion of air travels, potency of infection among migrants grow constantly. Although pre-checking health condition before boarding is available, its latent period can bring new infection cases to distant places easily. Thorough infection control measures should be implemented upon entry into the country. Best regards, 5971mak
Dear SaraRoseNY, Thank you for proofreading my writing. I truly enjoyed reading the revised version and your explanations. The summary terms are really helpful to write concise sentences. The "conclusion first" format is important, but I tend to forget it. I'll write another journal soon. Have a great weekend. Best regards, Mkawa
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Automated voice by AI on the New York times has become difficult to distinguish from human voices. When the AI is going to start reading articles, the beginning of narrations mentions that voices are read by the machines. Thus, I can know that sounds are imitation voice. If reading starts without the introduction, I may feel that the voices are human reading. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Daily convenience in our life is difficult to stop utilizing such as motor vehicles and clean elegant buildings. To change our thoughts and mindsets, clear future images are important to change our daily behaviors. Like Earth simulator, visible scientific forecast of ongoing civilized society can help them accept a sustainable life which consists of less fossil fuel consumption and green society. Authorities and institutions should display how the waste of natural resources could harm our environment. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
HI, SaraRoseNY How have you been? I think your comment sounds like you have been doing well. I have just come back to this study, and you are the first teacher I asked for checking. I like your sentences, because they are very logical, and mean exactly what I tried to say. Thank you so much. Especially, I like this: 'Applicants for a driver’s license should be examined under strictly set criteria, regardless of where they are originally from.' See you next time Take care Yoko
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Major cities and small towns have each advantage, respectably. So each individuals may choose favorite places to live by themselves. No matter where you live, the grass is always greener on the other side. As for "fun time", the phrase is educational for me to learn nuance of it. I would like to deepen my understanding of the differences in meaning between similar words and phrases. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. As for the differences between happy and fun, I understand the difference between them as follows by reviewing my grammar textbook and dictionary. Happy describes an emotional state and is often used to describe a person's feelings. So "happy and time in a sentence" emphasize a person's emotional movements in conversation. On the other hand, "a fun time" is commonly used to mean that someone had a good time with friends, family, and others. It signifies showing empathy with their friends and families. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections and instructions to my wrong usage of phrases. I reviewed about your advices and understand how to use the phrases correctly. Best regards, 5971mak （Examples for usage of happy with time） I am happy to have the time off. I was happy at that time. I was very happy at that time. But you can't be happy all the time. （Examples for usage of a fun time） That was a very fun time. I had a fun time with him. We have a fun time.
