Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. I will review your correction with logical sentences. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. I review your corrections carefully to raise my writting skill. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. I don't think that 100% cashless is a practical option because many elementaly school students and elderly are not familiar with smartphones. As a result, they may be alienated to visit the Osaka World Expo even though pre-paid cashcards are available. Given the convenience for those who don't use digital gear, the organizing committee should prepare real cash payment as well. According to a governmental survey, cashless payments reaches around 45% and the rest still needs real cash. Cashless payments only may cause dissatisfaction among visitors. Some of them may feel irritated and oppressed by a lack of real cash payment option. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Although I tried to write expressions of affirmative wording, it is common for me to write negation sentences that are common in Japanese expressions. However, I would be familiar with English expressions because I want to be a proficent in English. I review your polite and kind corrections to hone my writing skill. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are useful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are useful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are useful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Thank you, as always.
Thank you, as always.
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. For better or worse, collective harmony is the most important custom of Japanese culture, and teachers instill in students that group behavior is essential to become adults. It is said that respect for individuality is also important, but individuality can only be respected if ones follow a spirit of harmony. Individuality is never judged more important than the traditional custom unless one is awarded in a contest or exhibition. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are useful to me. That's right. When I was in nursery school, I remember the bread and rice balls my mother made for me were very delicious. As I grew up and started making them by myself, such tasks became just a part of my daily life. When I was a child, even trivial things made me happy in a limited world back then. Then, as I grew up, my world expanded, and as I was able to do more, my sense of fulfillment grew more and more. I want to continue growing in the future to be active and productive. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
