Dear SaraRoseNY, Thank you for your detailed advice! I learned not only English writing skills, but also historical facts, such as the purpose of using maggots. I used "able" instead of "could" because of your advice the other day, and I got the already negated "unable" this time. I heard the phrase "in the grand scheme of things" for the first time, and it sounds very useful. Finally, "reflect" is also concise and suitable word in this context, so I'll choose it in the next composition. I really appreciate your kind advice again. Hope your great weekend. Best regards, mkawa
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Yes, I agree with the negative aspects of online TV and videos. While focusing on their interests via smartphones, many of them will take it for granted that their thoughts and mindset are social standards. Alienating themselves from those who have different ideas, they naturally have difficulty having sympathy and compassion. Due to its convenience and comfortableness, many young adults are addicted to the digital products unintentionally. Therefore, parents and teachers should give warnings to children and young adults about this drawback of on-demand contents. Best regards, 5971mak
Thank you, as always.
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Yes, everbody can raise their performance and skills thanks to support from surounding people. Even those who are greatly talented should have a mindset of modest, and it is essential for them to have appreciation to team mates and staff. Mr. Otani have repeatedly shown gratitude to his team mates and staff. Contararily, Mr. Mizuhara's behavior was rude and arrogant, so it is rationale for the court to convict harsh sentence in addition to the prosecutor's recommendation. No one can live and grow by oneself, so everyone should keep it in mind to have a mindset of thankfullness to friends, family, co-workers, and those who support him/her. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Yes, a lot of talented students prefer going to Tokyo to enter prestigious universities for their future. Still, corporate headquarters mostly located in the capital, so the young can have more possibility to finding lucrative jobs. Capitalism must conglomerate big companies to raise more profits while implementing collaboration among those companies. Such economic natural force should be regulated by the governmental instruction in case of Tokyo megalopolice. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are useful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Thank you, as always.
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for collections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for collections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are useful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Thank you for your feedback. It is hard for a non-native speaker that I am to tell whether certain expressions are casual or formal. This is why your explanations were very helpful.
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpfuln to me. Currently, many parents are not enthusiastic to teach their children the importance of household chores. Instead, they urge the children to raise academic scores for their future. Although academic achievements can be important, daily skills to handle house tasks is essential as well. When they have family time, parents should show how to cook instead of lying down on a sofa or playing video games. As time flies, parents should show how to do daily house works so that children can become more independent later in life. To be active and productive as they become adults, I think that ability to do house chores will be necessary while working well. As far as they are proficient to do house tasks, they can manage by themselves regardless the places where they are transferred to unfamiliar places. Best regards, 5971mak
