Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. I agree with your opinion that “youth as a type of "talent" and pushes it hard, which cannot be further from the truth. It is a state that every one of us is blessed to have, and could be either fleeting or long-lasting depending on one's lifestyle or determination.” Thus,Ibelieve that education is critical to grow students with healthy mental growth. However, The education level available to an individual is determined largely by wealth, customs, and religious beliefs. The government should guarantee the right to an education so that those who want to learn can do so Best regards, 5971mak.
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are useful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Thank you, as always.
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. I understand that I should have written logically, so health concerns regarding plastics should be written in later half consistently. Thank you again for detailed corrections. I always appreciate your suggestions. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Dear SaraRoseNY, Thank you for sharing valuable perspective! When I was a high school student, long time ago, I learned the "so do + subject" format. But until now, I have never encountered the situation where it has been needed, and I forgot the format. Today, by learning writing through your advice, I'm so happy to have opportunity to use it in my real life. From now on, I try to use it. And I didn't know the difference between "keep up" and "catch up," so it is helpful! In addition, I wrote the phrase "state-of-the-art," because I got it in the text book of conversation class. However, it is outdated. I thought sometimes the text book isn't good. I'll use "the latest" in the similar cases. Best regards, mkawa
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are beneficial to me. I am impressed of your well-organized and logical contexts. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are useful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Thank you for correcting my text again. I am looking forward to taking your lecture again.
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. I understand that I should pay attention to the flow of contexts for the reader. By adding connective explanation between topics, my essay can become more persuasive. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corresctions that are helpful to me. Although people are well-informed aout the deterioration of nature by plastic wastes, disposable plastic bags are still common due to their convenience. To change current circumstances, the government should obligate stores to sell a one-time palstic bags for 100yen per bag. Currently, it costs only 5 - 6 yen a bag, but the price doesn't make sense when we consider nature protection. Seeing the obvious effect of cigarette price hike for smoking cessation, same effect can be expected if government takes strict decision. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. As more and more people move to urban regions, the number of motor vehicles elevates and residents live in a lot of private cars. Thus, authorities should implement strict regulations to protect them. Best regards, 5971mak
Dear SaraRoseNY Thank you for the detailed comments. As you said, I try to use a vriety of subjects from now. 'This has been helpful for me' is a good example. I'll keep going. From Lavender46516
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Evolution has a lot of mysteries that should be revealed for understanding how the natural selections and rearrengements. Is it random happenings or need for adaptation to changing environments? The findings of evolution can teach us how important we should pay attention to maintain ecosystem and habitable environment. Therefore, I'm very interested in how humans have evolved and are changing in the future. Best regards, 5971mak
