Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Given the current office environment that keeps windows shut, 24-hour continuous ventilation air system is essential for better air quality. As long as the office air is clean enough to help workers strive their tasks, companies can maintain high work-efficiency. Thus, companies should monitor CO2 level and emit it from offices. Best regards, 5971mak
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Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. There are eleven adjectives as follows, punitive, disruptive, exaggerated, significant, sensationalized, elusive, foreseeable, leniency, downright, problematic, similar. I review these words for next writing. Thank you very much. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Yes, many of the young hesitate to having face-to-face communication nowadays. They frequently require drafts documents or memo pads when they talk their colleagues and superiors. Instead, they heavily rely on SNS chatting to have frank conversation with their friends. Smartphone abuse becomes a concern in Japan as well. Best regards, 5971mak
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Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
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Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Seeing is believing. Visiting abroad can widen students views so that they can become an individual who is equipped with diversity and tolerance to different cultures. While the world globalizes and becomes interdependent, studying abroad for a certain months should be a part of college education. This can help them raise international friendship and elevate English proficiency. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Milk is one of my favorite beverages and I regularly drink a glass of milk daily. Currently, it is recognized as an essential food to satisfy calcium, milk protein and calories. To prevent weakning of bones, the value of milk would become significant from now on in super-aging society. Best regards, 5971mak
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Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Seeing my younger son who indulge in watching online videos, I am concerned how dopamine frack is a serious issue to the young. Due to the waste of time, he frequently have difficulty in doing daily routines and tasks. To reduce the repercussion of the video addiction, I regularly talk with him regarding short-term targets and final goals so that he could pay attention to things he should do. Parents are essential instructor to children, so daily conversation is critical to help the young focus on their tasks. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
