Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Thank you again for your bonus answer. I will keep it in mind to stay focused to answer an exercise question. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are useful to me. I agree with the importance of heat island phenominon which is common in Tokyo and Osaka in summer. The two metropolitan government have taken actions to pacify the influences of the heat waves by increasing greenery on the courtyard and along streets. As for the atmosphere of the New Year's holiday, television programs start with the Song Battle program (a singing contest between men and women) on New Year's Eve. After the show, many people watch the bells tolling on New Year's Eve on TV and then go to bed. On New Year's Day, scenes from all over Japan are broadcast in relay format, and there is a New Year's relay marathon race between companies. On the 2nd and 3rd, there was a New Year's relay marathon race between universities. Japanese people do not prefer thinking about painful things such as the weak yen, rising prices, global warming, the destruction of Gaza, the invasion of Ukraine, America's "Make America Great Again," and the expansion of Chinese hegemony until the New Year holidays are over. It is a Japanese custom to enjoy the festive atmosphere of the New Year. This year, as in previous years, we celebrated the New Year in a peaceful and calm mood as usual. Newspapers also do not report painful events or sad news during this holidays. We are eager to focus happy Japan and peaceful Japan, but the national debt is certainly increasing and is approaching default. I think critical thinking is still lacking in Japan. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are useful to me. Setting goals can be beneficial for me to raise myself continuously. Every year end, I look back what I could achieve and what I want to challenge for next year. Once I can make clear for next objectives, I can build my schedule to overcome. As long as I am in good health and productive, I would like to enjoy developing myself. Best regards, 5971mak
Dear SaraRoseNY, Happy new year! I hope you have a great year! Thank you for your kind advice and correction. It was so helpful for me. I didn't know that adjective "old" can be potentially derogatory. I'm going to use "the elderly" from now on. The word "time-tested" is new for me. It sounds really useful for me, especially in my job. In addition, the method to avoid repetition is so informative. Thank you so much for your all advice. Best regards, mkawa
Thank you, as always.
Thank you, as always.
Thank you, as always.
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are useful to me. This year's New Year's Day is a calm and peaceful. I hope to brush up my conversation skill in English in this year. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Thank you for your careful corrections despite the busy time of the end of this year. As I have talked the elderly, many of them have difficulty using smartphones due to small screens. Current elderly are not the internet generation, so they may feel barrier to having the digital gadget. As time goes by, when present young generation becomes senior generation, situations may be improved by more smartphone proficiency. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful and easy to understand to me. The hometown tax program is a unique spetial tax which invigorate local economy in Japan. Since urbanization with civilization has progressed in big cities like Tokyo and Osaka, other rural regions have failed to recover their local economy due to aging with shrinking population. Under such circumstance, a governor of Fukui prefecture, Mr.Kazumi Nishikawa invented the tax system for countryside revitalization. This tax system can run on the basis of resident's good deeds that sustains their hometown by creating original products with specialties. Thus, this system could be vulnerable to misuse of tax revenues diverted by the profit-driven shopping behemoth. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are useful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. There are only three days left in this year, I am excited for welcoming a new year. On this January 1, I was working in the office despite a happy new year atmosphere, suddenly, my office started trembling and my smartphone rang an emergency siren to notice me big earthquake occurred in my prefecture. As I felt a long time shaking our region, I was appalled by possible serious devastation. As time went by, TV and radio broadcasted serious damage in the affected areas. My place was somewhat distant from the seisemic center, my family was not involved with damages luckily. I hope that coming new year will be peaceful. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Dear SaraRoseNY, Thank you very much for your kind corrections and suggesting alternatives. They are really helpful for improving my sentences. As always, I learned a lot of important knowledge about writing English from your corrections. I haven't been able to tell which word I should choose and been particular about using effective words to explain my thoughts well so far. I would like to acquire your style of writing. I strongly appreciate it. It may take me a lot of time to acquire it, but I want to continue my efforts. I am grateful for your warm support. Best regards, atsuko5
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are useful to me. One of the causing misinformation regarding the image of Mt. Fuji is exaggeration of the view from afar. Due to such a picturesque wonderful image, watchers can wrongly perceive the mountain must be a peaceful place. Local authorities should give warning to those who plan to crime. Best regards, 5971mak
