Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
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Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. The criminal law places great importance on precedents in Japan, and sometimes decisions are made that are far from the public sentiment. By having participation of the lay judges in trials, the proceedings can be discussed more objectively. I believe that the situation where police force confessions through aggressive interrogations will decrease, and fair trials based on evidence will increase. Best regards, 5971mak
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Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Dear SaraRoseNY, Thank you very much for your advice! That's exactly what I wanted to know and I will take my time to study customary phrases and vocabulary as you mentioned. If there is another opportunity, please offer your support again. Have a nice day! Warm regards, Aoi
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Thank you. Thanks to your correction, I learned how to use "dash" (—) .
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are useful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. I should have written my conclusion that sleeping habit is adapted with family matters. Regardless of my private routines, parents should think about their children first and act accordingly. Therefore, I disagree that society mentions individual's sleeping habit. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Thank you. You answered my questions with some examples. It was very helpful!
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. I understand my conclusion regarding social media topic was abrupt and no evidence was mentioned. I should have mentioned that several local governments enacted regulations as bylaw with fines to parents to stop children's smartphone addiction. Although some people doubt the effectiveness of the bylaw, the legislation could affect parents to pay attention to the addiction. In particular, when children behave delinquency and misconduct with their smartphones, the police will harshly criticize their parents. In Japan, parental supervision is considered more essential than a child's right to freedom. Best regards, 5971mak
