Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are useful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Thank you for your feedback. It is hard for a non-native speaker that I am to tell whether certain expressions are casual or formal. This is why your explanations were very helpful.
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpfuln to me. Currently, many parents are not enthusiastic to teach their children the importance of household chores. Instead, they urge the children to raise academic scores for their future. Although academic achievements can be important, daily skills to handle house tasks is essential as well. When they have family time, parents should show how to cook instead of lying down on a sofa or playing video games. As time flies, parents should show how to do daily house works so that children can become more independent later in life. To be active and productive as they become adults, I think that ability to do house chores will be necessary while working well. As far as they are proficient to do house tasks, they can manage by themselves regardless the places where they are transferred to unfamiliar places. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. According to centenarian studies in Japan, over 65% of people consumed dairy products, including yogurt, "almost every day," and about half consumed eggs. A similar distribution was seen for tofu and seaweed, with both showing that they were eaten at least once a week. About 90% of both men and women ate vegetables "almost every day," showing that they were the foods most actively consumed, along with rice. As this result shows, I believe that healthy diet is essential for longivity in Japan. The only drawback is the high salt intake. The average Japanese person consumes 12g of salt per day. This is twice the recommended amount, and it is said that Japanese people have high blood pressure due to excessive salt intake. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Suicide attempt mostly complicated with depression is preventable and treattable. Therefore, countermeasures should be taken to save lives. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. I understand that I should have paid attention to the meanings of "raise," "elevate," and "result in". Thank you for detailed revision. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are useful to me. Yes, customers should pay attention to foodborne illnesses, in particular, in hot summer. Restaurants are cautious to those who request bringing back leftover food and usually ask them how long does it take until they go back to their home. When it takes more than 30 minutes, restaurants' clarks put some ice packs into the container cooling leftover food. As long as customers and restaurants are weary to food poisoning, it is a good deed that customer enjoy the leftover on the next day, isn't it? Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Yes, generosity can harm the world such as climate crisis and dire poverty in those who are in need when those who live in well-to-do countries think the issues are not relevant. For example, as scientists proved, climate crisis can bring catastrophic future for the world. Dire poverty can cause fatal infectious diseases to the world. As the world health organization has revealed the fatal consequences of smoking, the world is now directing to smoke free environment. Although ignorance and negligence are frequently occurred, the power of science can change current behaviors and develop the world to be more peaceful society. I believe that people's desire to live in peace and tranquility will change the world for the better little by little. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. I agree with the thing that Mr. Hideo Nomo ( I am sorry for mistaking his name) was more remarkable because he was expelled from the Japanese Baseball League for no permission to him going to the Major League. As his team and manager never agreed with his wish, he was forced to be penalized for his disobedience. He confessed that he might have lost all his honor and accomplishments during the period playing in Japan on a TV program. Some senior players and retired players criticized him as a betrayer to his team mates and his team exectives. If he were one of Japanese citizens, they said that he should have followed instructions ordered by his team exectives. However, after having moved the U.S., his great performance has changed perception of Japanese people and provide that Jpanese players can also play well in the U.S. Therfore, I think that he is a pioneer of Japanese baseball players who can show great achievements in the Major League. He is one of the individuals who realized American dream, resulting change of sentiments over Japanese citizens regarding Mr.Nomo. Best regards, 5971mak
Thank you, as always.
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
