Hello Sara, Thank you for your worming message. This is my first time using IDIY. So I was little nervous. However, when I saw the polite correction you returned, I was surprised and impressed. As I saw my poor diary change like this, I wanted to make an effort to improve my English skills more. Thank you.
Thank you so much! I was very impressed with your kind and detailed explanation. I’m afraid it must have taken a lot of your time.
Dear SaraRoseNY, Thank you for your kind advice and amazing correction! And I also appreciate your encouragement for my invention. I learnt the effective way to use passive voice, which can emphasize things what I want to write. In addition, I understood the early positioning in the sentence can maximize the significance of the content. The difference between "potential" and "possibility", which you adviced are also very helpful!! I'll write another composition soon. Have a great week! Best regards, mkawa
Thank you, as always.
Thank you for checking my essay!
Thank you very much. Your feedback is useful and understandable.
Thank you as always. The quality of hair cuts depends on the skill of hair dresser, not on the age of them.
Thank you for checking my essay!
Your corrections are informative. Thank you as always.
Thank you for giving me a good phrase. “This too shall pass” gives me courage!
Dear SaraRoseNY, Thank you for your kind advice and correction. I learnt a lot. But I had to chose the detailed proofreading instead of basic one, because there are numerous new expressions for me in your correction. For example, "capability-wise", "complacent about", "lose sight of", "striving for", "counterproductive", and "abolish" are new expressions. I'll read aloud and remember these expressions! Best regards, mkawa
Your feedback is very detailed and helpful to reinforce my knowledge and proper usage of each English word, thank you so much!
Thank you for you correction and useful comments. I would like to apply your suggestions to my future assignment.
Dear SaraRoseNY Through just one essay, you taught me a lot and each correction comes with detailed logical explanation. I really appreciate it, thank you!
Thank you, as always.
