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Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Currently, after the end of travel ban, a lot of hospitality campanies try creating exciting and enjoyable attractions to alure more foreign customers. Although they want to make interesting events, safety should be placed at first priority not to cause accidents and troubles. There are travel information spots in Tokyo, so they should provide the information about public rules in Japan. To make the trip to Japan a pleasant memory, knowing the proper public etiquette in Japan will help foreigners understand Japanese culture. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. I appreciate that you analyzed the heinous burglaries in the Kanto region. According to the news reports, as you mentioned, obsolescence of a traditional virtue “do unto others as you would have others do unto you” may work critically to increase selfish young people. In addition, social network services accelerate their biased thinking as they consider how they become wealthy without making an effort. Furthermore, as a result of relocating factories abroad in several decades, a decline of moderate wage work polarizes the young into a small number of rich and many low-wage simple workers. While the ringleader exploits those who are desperate for their future with alluring lucrative offer on the social media, some may apply the break-ins, expensive car thefts, and burglaries. Currently, when the young hope having stable and moderate wages, they have to require academic carriers, decent behaviors, and something special vocational related qualifications. In this point of view, parents responsibility is essential to instruct their children to have patience, collaboration, direct communication, and continuous efforts for their better future. These wisdoms are still vital for the young. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. As differences of physical appearences, I remember Ms.Naomi Osaka who is one of the world-class tennis players. Her mother is a Japanese and her father is Haitian, so she is a person of mixed races. As a result, her skin color is light black and hair is black hair(Kinky). After she won the U.S. open tennis tournament, her mother answered on an iterview of TV news programme. When Naomi was going to enter elementary school in Japan, she decided moving to the U.S to protect her because they were afraid of bullying at school due to clear appearence gap with Japanese students. Accepting tolerance is difficult to realize even now, I think that schools should have classes about the importance of diversity for the better future. As Japan needs economic migrants to sustain our society, tolerance would be indispensable to live together in communities. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Although there are strict regulations regardung election campaign and fund, family reputation still help the candidates win the election. However, a political field is so tough that descendants of the famous political family frequently lose their status in the long run. Talented politicians can survive and their inherent family statuses are powerless when they don't have the skill to negotiate with other lawmakers. I don't think the job of a politician is as privileged as it appears on TV. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regrds, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Your logical flow is easy to understand and persuasive. I try to brush up my writting skill in English essays. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Although the price of low-cost carriers is appealing, I usually purchase discounted air-tickets of major airlines. It is hard for me to abandon the peace of mind that comes with branded airlines. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are useful to me. I am concerned that the young now heavily dependent on their smartphones to exchange words with their friends. Their situations are an addiction level so that they may have difficulty handling daily things when their smartphones ran out of battery. I am afraid that they may excessively hesitate to communicating with others on face-to-face conversation. Teachers should instill them with the importance of verbal communication to build reliable relationships. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful for making a flow of coherence. I keep it in mind to write a essay with the flow of logical sentences. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. I understand that I should have mentioned about long-term commitment. As for this topic, currently, the Japanese government subsidizes the "Regional Revitalization Cooperation Team project" nationwide in Japan. This project has a policy to actively welcome young people from outside the region in rural areas where depopulation and aging are progressing rapidly, to have them carry out regional cooperation activities, and to maintain and strengthen regional power while responding to the needs of urban residents who are eager to live in the region and contribute to the local community. This can be a beneficial opportunity for young people who do not have the funds to open their own store in the urban cities. The local municipalities provide their tenant spaces, accomodations, and camaraderie with local residents to the newcomers. The governments expect that some of the participants in this program may hope long-term commitment voluntarily. Depopulation in rural areas is a critical issue in Japan nowadays. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. I agree with the huge demand of AI machines in agriculture and elderly care businesses. Since these industries contain a lot of strenuous manual tasks, the young don't prefer working in the fields. In particular, according to my friends who work as farmers aged 50 years old, current many farmers discourage their children to inherit their family bisiness because of low wages with long working hours. Although agricultural machines are already available, a chain of work tasks still persists stressful working situations. Even though AI machines will be available, they are powerless and useless against drastic deterioration of weather conditions like droughts and global warming. As for nursing care industry, some people claim introducing AI tools to mitigate workers physical tasks, but the effectiveness is limited due to pervasion of dementia. The disease demands care givers catching atmospheres of care service users. I don't think that AI can grasp the eerie atmosphere of the excited users come from cognitive impairment and loss of self-repression. In these two fields, especially, human labor seems to be essential for maintenounce even if AI tools and robots develop. Therefore, I believe that internationalization and diversification of Japanese society will be indispensable to sustain while accepting economic migrants as a part of communities. They should not be treated as replaceable parts for businesses. Best regards, 5971mak
