Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. I think that foreign cuisines can become the beginning of globalization in Japan. Although collective harmony is common, palatable dishes can intrude our daily life and expand in our society if the taste is wonderful. For example, not only Tom Yum soup but also Korean pickles, Italian pizzas, and Spanish paella are in Japan nowadays. While having such foreign dishes, people can become familiar with foreign cultures. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. I understand that I should avoid using "you" except for strong advice. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. I understand the importance of positive writting thet can provide a hopeful prospect to the reader. Best regards, 5971mak
Dear SaraRoseNY, Thank you always for continued support. I had a summer vacation called "obon" in Japan. As most of us agreed, both blue and green colors represent the innate human need for nature, however I wonder in the future, if human born on the Moon or even Mars, what color could mean nature for them. Have a nice day! Best regards, MaiT
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards. 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. I really appreciate your wide and polite vocabulary and wording, which can make my writting skill better. Thank you very much, again. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Thank you for your feedback. You made my sentences much smoother and clearer.
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Thank you for proofreading my text. I am looking forward to taking your lesson gain.
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. I reviewed your correction while checking my sentences. As you instructed, I understand the importance of organization and grouping to make persuasive essays. Thank you for detailed and educational sentences. Best regards, 5971mak
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Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. In my view, a lack of literacy skill has become a serious social issue as the reclusive become common in Japan nowadays. Many of them are said to have a problem to learn subjects despite of high school graduation. As smartphone has greatly increased, the young relying on their digital tools too much. As a result, they may lose acquiring essential capabities like communication, literacy, arithmetics, and a lack of resilience. In order to improve current situation of the young, schools should mandate Japanese proficiency test to students so that they can be aware of a lack of literacy in Japanese. As for "scalping", such behavior is now rampant to earn money from innocent individuals. The Japanese government should make a law to protect citizens from the predator. If users accessed online shopping sites like mercari, the company could require the users to upload their ID card such as driver licenses. This decision can expel the greedy scalpers to make the websites peaceful for innocent customers. The internet is very convenient and enjoyable, but anonymity is still a source of troubles and crimes. More regulations should be implemented to secure safety among users. Best regards, 5971mak
Thank you for your helpful comment. I am looking forward to taking your lesson again.
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. I totally agree that smartphone overuse can harm both students intelligence and physical health. Basically, smartphone screens are so small that users will have eye problems, neck injuries, a lack of concentration for assignments, and mental obsession of online communication. I am dubious why health authority gives warnings and caustions regarding smartphone abuse. Daily convinience may be comfortable in daily life, but its long-term overuse can cause serious troubles to them. Parents and educators should provide how to get along with the excitement and pleasure while focusing on screens to the users. Best regards, 5971mak
