Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are useful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are useful to me. I understand the importance to avoid logical essay from “crowded” with repeatedly mentioning the person reference. As you corrected my sentence, I would like to replace the known doers. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Since the value of yen is expected to drop unfortunately, traveling overseas will be one of the luxurious things for many. Unlike special occasions such as honeymoon travel and 30th wedding memorial travel, they will opt for closer, freer, and palatable domestic travels. As for “We agree to disagree”, the idea is not common yet in Japan and collective harmony is one of the mandates in our society. While keeping a sense of peaceful atmosphere among citizens regardless of individuals’thoughts, diversity should be accepted to raise a sense of happiness because everyone can have their own thoughts and beliefs. I believe that a lack of tolerance against diversity is one of the primary causes of the social withdrawal in Japan. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. I understand that I misunderstand the question, so I write the same topic again. Tomorrow, I re-write it tomorrow. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. I will review your correction to be able to write persuasive sentences like your sentences. Best regards, 5971mak
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Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. I understand the importance of logical order for the effective writting to emphasize my thoughts. I would like to write esseys with such strategy. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are useful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Hello Sara, Thank you very much for reviewing my writing! Your comments are full of information and gives me lots of insights. I'm impressed by your comments! Kind regards, Naoto
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Anti-aging movement has become popular due to both preference of the elderly and the Japanese government. Since the birth rate has been very low, authority plot a tactics to delay the retirement age for reducing the budget of pension system. As long as anti-aging can contribute to boost happiness over elderly people, the plot can make sense to prevent from collapse of social security in Japan. Best regards, 5971mak
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Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Since I am one of the fish eateries, I earnestly hope that fish will ever regain its past popularity. While fish farming has become a real nowadays such as salmon, mackerel, and tuna, fish farming industry is struggling for prevention of marine pollution. When corporations breed fish in a segragated sea area by using fishing nets, scattered sea food can disseminate into outside of the area through the net. As a result, leftover fish food can damage its sea environment, which can destroy ecosystem in pacific ocean. It is the reason why fish farming is not common yet. To protect our environment, fish farming is strictly regulated. Best regards, 5971mak
