Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Rapid aging of Japan brings a pile of tasks which we have to overcome, but the transition increases diversity and tolerance in our homogeneous atmosphere as well. To raise healthy aging, as the Japanese government repeatedly appeal the importance of healthy meals, restaurants and canteens create healthier food. While elevation of the healthy eating, the new norm expands more tolerance over citizens. Little by little, there is a growing trend of people eating what they want to eat and drink nowadays. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Urban life can be exciting with a lot of activities, though people's daily life is commonly too busy and messy. Thus, urban dwellers may need an oasis-like place such as art cafe to have a break while handling a lot of things to do. The new style of Starbucks can contribute to increasing a calm situation in noisy and crowded city life. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Since random goods machines are everywhere sucha as grocery stores and shopping malls, many children beg a play to their parents. In addition, its spending is relatively low so that many adults tend to pamper their children. Such situation may lead to a waste of money in daily life, from the educational point of view, parents should make a rule that allows ones to play the random goods. I understand abuse of "will" in my sentences. Except for a definite future and one's intention, I should have limit the usage of "will." Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Since it is impossible for us to purchase house again, we spent almost one year preparation. We had a lot of points to discuss selection of land, housing style, exterior, interior, and parking lots. While they consume a lot of time, we could enjoy planning comfortable house with imaginations. Thus, when our home was completed to built, my family was impressed with spacious house. During the time we have children, owning a house is a better option to have a happy family time. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. The digital cash is one of the innovations that can save cost and time to purchase. Thanks to it, our daily life became more convenient and easier to split payments with others. Although its convenience may cause over-spending unintentionally, apps to limit the amount of payments can prevent waste of money. As long as users utilize contactless payments wisely, the digital money can help us have convenience in daily life. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
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Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Although it is the beginning of spring season now, Tokyo recorded that today's temperature reached 80.6°F which was judged as a summer day. TV news reported citizens in Tokyo were surprised at such sudden sweltering heat. As global warming certainly deteriorates, governments and companies should take actions to prevent heat stroke. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. In the past, girls were regarded as a family member to look after parents, a husband, and children. Thus, it was a traditional gender role that women have to stay at home and handle all house tasks. It was a just half-century common social norm. However, as more girls can have higher education, more female graduates tackle to work continuously after starting families. Current social situation in Japan is the result of tremendous effort by a lot of working female employees. I feel that female empowerment evolved our society and more wealth become available. Gender equality can bring more freedom and wealth in a society. Being a homemaker is not profession but it was regarded as an appropriate future option for females. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Artificial chemicals can boost our health but they are not always versatile. The chemicals may cause negative effects without being aware of them. Long-term influence should be regularly checked whether or not they are safe to our health. Best regards, 5971mak
