Dear SaraRoseNY, Thank you for proofreading my writing. I'm so glad to read that the first sentence was natural by using "where". I have practiced "where" clause many times for 6 months with you, and finally I am able to use it naturally!!! I also learnt that "by ...ing" is an useful method of connection. From now on, I will use both of them! I'm preparing anther composition!!! Have a great Sunday!!! Best regards, Mkawa
Thank you for checking my essay!
Thank you, as always.
Dear SaraRoseNY, Thank you for detailed proofreading. I learnt a lot, especially about the importance of finding specific words. From now on, I will try to find specific words. I'm sorry that I use "corporate" as "collaborate" in another composition today. I made same mistakes several times. Today, I wrote the next story. Could you correct it, please? Best regards, mkawa
Thank you for your corrections. I was surprised to see it turned into a very sophisticated essay! Yes, I will keep on practicing.
Thank you for your correction. I learned a lot. I will keep writing and want to be better.
Dear SaraRoseNY, Thank you for your compassion and kindness! Now things returned to normal for us, but there are still people who are facing the disaster. I really hope the situation will be better. I learnt that there are more appropriate words than simple and jeneral words. And I didn't use the positive words instead of negative words again... Next time, I'll try them. Also, I'd like to use the word, such as "upon" from now on. I appreciate the detailed proofreading this time! Have a great weekend! Best regards, Mkawa
I always appreciate your correction on my sentences. Thank you.
Dear SaraRoseNY, Thank you for proofreading and messages! I learnt a lot especially how to use Gerund. I want use gerund well, from now on. Yes, having real-life English conversation was wonderful experience, and I realized that I need more practice! I decided to study harder! I'll send another writing to you soon! Have a nice day! Best regards, Mkawa
Dear SaraRoseNY, Thank you for proofreading my writing. I learnt the importance of positive expression. Next time, I will try to use positive words instead of negative words. I'm so happy to send in my composition to you more frequently. Best regards, Mkawa
Thank you, as always. Wishing you and yours all the best in 2024.
Dear SaraRoseNY, Thank you for giving me the amazingly quick answer to my submission. As I always tell you, your writings are beautiful. This time I especially like the 3rd one. "However, it is impossible to entirely avoid issues like traffic disruptions, even though they can be predicted fairly easily in advance." You added "entirely ", "fairly", "easily". I see they made a big difference. Bye until we see again. Yoko
Dear SaraRoseNY, Merry Christmas! I hope you are doing well. Thank you for correcting my writing and your messages! Everything that you taught me was helpful. I'll try to avoid pronoun confusion from now on. I really appreciate all of your messages and corrections this year, which are my treasure! My vocabulary and perspective were more expanded than before because of your advice. During winter vacation, I'm going to review all of my writing which you proofreaded. I hope you will have wonderful new year holidays! I'll send you my writing next month. Best regards, Mkawa
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. In Japan, we don't have X'mas vacation. Instead, there is tradition to have 4 or 5 days winter vacation ( 12/30-1/3) to go back ones' hometown to celebrate a happy new year with ones' parents. Have a nice vacation! Best regards, 5971mak
