Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. I understand that I should have written past sentences for hypothetical explanations. I have a bad memory, but I try to keep it in mind for correct grammer. Thank you! Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. I understand that mentioning a packed train was abruptly and irrelevant. I should have focused on the flexibility of the Seishun 18 Ticket. I considered if the ticket keeps its flexibility, what makes the JR company annoy. That is why I thought heavy crowd in morning rush hours may be a concern for the company. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Current political situation are already going to chaos. Since the LDP lost their decision-making power, unplanned and harmful negotiation is occuring with Democratic party for the people. In order to gain the cooperation of the Democratic Party for the People, the Liberal Democratic Party decided to raise the basic income tax deduction. However, this will worsen the national finances due to reduction of tax revenue and ultimately lead to deficit bonds. Unrestrained policy agreements will place a heavy burden on future generations. I am concerned with deterioration of financial condition of Japan. Best regards, 5971mak
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Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. I appreciate your suggestion to maintain balance depending on situations for daily conversation. While increasing the topics I can mention, I am eager to make cheerful atmosphere with my friends. Best regards, 5971mak
Dear SaraRoseNY, Thank you for such a sophisticated correction! The expressions such as "create atmosphere," "without strictly following the instructions," and "on one's own" are very helpful. As you revised, "perspective" is suitable to my writing, rather than "deep understanding." In addition, as you wrote, the ultimate purpose is to "deliver the best performance from our products," rather than the product itself. I totally agree with your suggestions! In the near future, I will send in another writing! Best regards, mkawa
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. I agree that gender roles were essential to make a society prosper before industrial revolution. However, as circumstances and conditions of a society change, people also should develop gender view and elevate fundamental rights of the weak for better future. Having happiness is not guaranteed to those who are strong positions in a society, but the right to be happy should be certified to all citizens. As we can have more wealth than the past century, basic human lights and the right to practice self-decision should be recognized as an essential social standard. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are useful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Thank you for your feedback. Your detailed explanations were easy to follow, and the alternative words you showed me helped me expand my vocabulary!
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are useful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Thank you so much for your detailed explanation.
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Currently, after the end of travel ban, a lot of hospitality campanies try creating exciting and enjoyable attractions to alure more foreign customers. Although they want to make interesting events, safety should be placed at first priority not to cause accidents and troubles. There are travel information spots in Tokyo, so they should provide the information about public rules in Japan. To make the trip to Japan a pleasant memory, knowing the proper public etiquette in Japan will help foreigners understand Japanese culture. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. I appreciate that you analyzed the heinous burglaries in the Kanto region. According to the news reports, as you mentioned, obsolescence of a traditional virtue “do unto others as you would have others do unto you” may work critically to increase selfish young people. In addition, social network services accelerate their biased thinking as they consider how they become wealthy without making an effort. Furthermore, as a result of relocating factories abroad in several decades, a decline of moderate wage work polarizes the young into a small number of rich and many low-wage simple workers. While the ringleader exploits those who are desperate for their future with alluring lucrative offer on the social media, some may apply the break-ins, expensive car thefts, and burglaries. Currently, when the young hope having stable and moderate wages, they have to require academic carriers, decent behaviors, and something special vocational related qualifications. In this point of view, parents responsibility is essential to instruct their children to have patience, collaboration, direct communication, and continuous efforts for their better future. These wisdoms are still vital for the young. Best regards, 5971mak
