Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are useful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Yes, I know the danger of LED lights directly attached to the old fluorescent light socket because the appliance has electric circuit for traditional fluorescent lights. LED lights can elevate the circuit temperature that may cause fire. Although advertisement of LED lights showcases its notification on flyers and websites, people doesn't seem to understand the message because many people are not familiar with the mechanism of electric circuit. Authorities and home appliance companies should instruct to replace new light socket for LED lights when customers change to LED lights. Best regards, 5971mak
Thank you for your hard work!! You always give me a lot of comments in short time. You're my favorite tutor that's why. I will try to choose clearer words and avoid to use negative sentences next time. Have a good day!!!
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. I should have written that I think that vulnerable people are being eliminated by dying "before" age 85. I mean that the vulnerables must have gotten natural selection. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. In my view, due to skyrocketing number of parcels, it is common for Amazon to face a lack of delivery workers. To make ends meet between demand and supply, customers collaboration will be essential. Currently, most community have convenience stores, so customers also can pick up their boxes at the stores as much as possible. More collaboration with receipients should be emphasized to compensate for the labor shortage in delivery businesses. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. At first, it is stressful for me to learn English because it is clearly distinct from Japanese．While learning English, little by littele, English has different culture from that of Japanese. As I understand that language is a part of culture, reading English books can teach different value and belief. Now, learning English becomes an essential part of my daily routines to grow myself. Thanks to having things to learn in English, I can have enjoyable daily life. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Currently, as online shopping has become common like Amazon and Yahoo shopping, the online shopping companies offer a lot of delivery jobs. Due to a lack of delivery workers, employees can have relatively better amount of wages for a while. More workers are interested in such work, the wage may be decline due to a lot of job seekers. As a lack of labor become obvious in other businesses, workers will change to such lucrative works. Thus, they will have to learn continuously to adapt changing working environment. Best regards, 5971mak
I appreciate for you!! I'm surprised of such detailed comments!! I'd love to ask you to fix my sentences next time.
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. While having new goals, I can have a productive daily life which is essential to have a sense of worthdoing. The targets can foster myself to grow more, hence I can have more happiness along the challenges. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
