

Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak

Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak

Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak

Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Not just in e-sports, athletes should prepare their second career while playing competition. Since their career span is short, they had better acquiring high school or college diploma. I am concern that some juveniles may claim challenging professional e-sports players to expel from classes. Best regards, 5971mak

Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak

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Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak

Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpfull to me. I understand the importance of civility because minor rudenesses can lead to a cause of dissatisfaction among relatives. Best regards, 5971mak

Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpfull to me. Best regards, 5971mak

Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpfull to me. Best regards, 5971mak

Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpfull to me. Best regards, 5971mak

Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak

Hello, SaraRoseNY, It's WOW!! I like your passages. You added some words and phrases which make the original passages much clear, thank you so much. Especially, "But it has come a long way","It was a sign of the times—back then,"are brilliant choices to add making the flow of story much smoother and understandable. I learnt many new words, such as thrifty, flaunt, and frugal, from you, and they are interesting and, I think, useful. Actually, the last sentence is a bit hard for me to digest the meaning. Anyways, they are all great, and I enjoy reading and learning them. Yoko

Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Yes, healthy aging and joyful longevity are essential to protect the elderly from debilitating situations. Longevity should be a fun time for them, so health authority should expand health promotion among people. Best regards, 5971mak

Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. My thought is possible to practice since I have continueously practiced after starting my family. Education is very important to change tradition. Given the importance of a sustainable society, the Japanese government should take more actions because Japan will be aging with drastic speed no other nations have experienced. Best regards, 5971mak