Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. I understand that I should not have written my last sentence that will discourage readers to agree with my essay. I will write essay within the scope of what should be done by local authority for public safety. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. I agree with negative influence of giant multinational corporations. Under the market principles, if big companies enjoy free competition, small businesses in remote areas will be davastated. There are so many local shopping street that are occupied with closed and shuttered shops nowadays. To stop devastation of local economy, the government should regurate capital investments by foreign companies. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Thank you for polishing my writing!
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Dear SaraRoseNY, Thank you so much for the correction. As you always suggest to avoid repetition, I couldn't do it again... I'll try to do it in the next writing. "Tether" is new word for me and seems useful, so I'll try to use it in my conversation class! The expression "regardless of my moderator status" is stunning! It's really consice, and understandable. In addition, I learned that too many verbs can be alternated to noun phrasep. Thank you again, and I wish your Merry Christmas! Best regards, mkawa
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. I reviewed your correction and want to brush up my English more. Best regards, 5971mak
Thank you for your feedback. As always, your detailed explanations were easy to follow, and the alternative sentences you offered me were very useful! I have written almost 1500 essays, but I need a lot of training to write essays that are both grammatically correct and sounding natural.
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Thank you for your feedback. You really polished my sentences!
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. In my view, the Japanese government should take strong leadership to stop the deterioration of concentration in Tokyo. As long as the government allow market principal of capitalism, the concentration of population in Tokyo continues worsening year after year. Such trend boosts current depopulation in remote areas and overpopulation in Tokyo. The economical gap results in social anxiety between the have and the have not. At the same time, abandoned their parents hometowns highly lead to collapse due to a lack of the young. Consequently, our society will fail to maintain sustainable development and increase crime rates after all if current conditions remain. To improve a national balance, it is indispensable for us to incentive like corporation tax cut and increase online transaction with relocating headquarters. Best regards, 5971mak
