Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. In the past, although our society was thought to be a homogeneous demographics, aging population with smaller young work force would transform Japan becoming multicultural and globalized. Through accepting more economic migrants, Japanese residents expand tolerance and accept those who have different belief. By elevating a sense of internationalization, we may realize a sustainable society for next generations. Best regards, 5971mak
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Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. In the past like three decades ago, although FIFA World Cup was unfamiliar to us, the world-class tournament has become popular among us as well. While viewing the soccer games, we also have a sense of excitement during the games. Soccer seems to widening the variety of sports entertainment in Japan. Best regards, 5971mak
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Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Surplus food is now a critical environmental issue, but its awareness is limited. Goverments should address it to stop environmental devastation. Best regards, 5971mak
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