Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. I understand that essay needs to clearly juxtapose two opposing views; the approval and the caveat to the main topic.“While goals are positive,” and “the healthy, beneficial missions that sports events can accomplish”, these expressions are impressive to boost eco-friendly sports event. Paraphrasing of “pay attention to” is also good for me to increase my vocabulary. Thank you very much. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. The terms of court proceeding is well organized, the explanation of words choice is useful for me. I will review them to utilize on future writting. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Drinking gathering can be an effective way to strengthen teamwork as long as subordinates are easy to skip such occasions. However, forcing participation or excessive drinking can have the opposite effect. Excessive drinking can reduce work efficiency the next day. Thus, free perticipation and mild drinking are essential prerequisite to hold the after-work drinking occasions. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are useful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Thank you for your feedback. Your explanations were easy to understand. I also appreciate you polishing my sentences.
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Dear SaraRoseNY, Thank you for your kindness and detailed explanations. I learned a lot: 1）Subjects should be short 2）"away" shows a distance in time 3）how to write temperature 4) "advise" takes infinitives 5) buy person object format I understood the importance of indirect speech. Thank you for answering my question as well. My son recovered after all. Your message truly supported me. I'm sorry that I couldn't send message sooner. Have a great Sunday. Best regards, mkawa
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. I understand that I missed the transition effect in the last section. My statement was not clear enough. What I wanted to say was that only limiting extra working hours would be counterproductive if wages were not raised. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. I am feeling that this concern has become a serious issue over the young smartphone users. They skip the processes of problem-solving habits and instead rely on Chat GPT to find answers that someone makes. Overreliance on technology is risky because users may make a mistake and wrong decisions. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
