Dear SaraRoseNY, Thank you for fixing what I wrote to be more natural. Speaking of rice and honey, as you said, they contain a lot of sugar. Actually, I have high cholesterol and I should cut back sugar! I’ll write about my taking steps in order to cut back sugar these days. See you soon. Best regards, wako38
Dear Ms. SaraRoseNY Thank you for proofreading! The alternative explanations that you suggested were so useful, and expanded my expression. I really appreciate your advices. I'll avoid repetitive phrases, and try to increase my vocabulary!! I'll submit another composition soon! Best regards, Mkawa
Teacher SaraRoseNY I understand the usefulness of the balanced presentation. Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards 5971mak.
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Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards 5971mak.
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Dear Ms. SaraRoseNY Thank you for your amazing proofreading and kind messages! I was really impressed by them. Your correction is like a magic! I want to write a sophisticated composition like yours. I will practice more!!! I'll submit another composition soon!
I like this type of lesson! That's fun and your advice is always great!
Thank you very much for your careful correction. Thank you also for the advice about the middle name. I will be careful in the future based on your suggestions!
Thank you as always for taking the time to carefully correct my writing.
Hello, SaraRoseNY, How are you doing? I'm happy to hear from you again here. Thank you for the amendments you made on my essay. I'm happy to read your nice comments. Your corrections all make perfect sense to me. You gave me the beautiful examples that come with lot of impressive expressions and phrases, and which is exactly what meant to say. I enjoyed reading them.Thank you. I hope you have an enjoyable day. Take care! Kind regards, Yoko
Dear SaraRoNY, I appreciate your kind explanation. Have a wonderful weekend. Mashroom
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. I believe that age discrimination will certainly happen to revive the competitiveness of Japanese company. Do you know the middle-aged workers who do not work while sitting around all day? Strict regulations of the Japanese labor cords have created a lot of goldbrickers in many Japanese companies nowadays. It is necessary for Japan to implement the solutions to eliminate such unfair condition even though segregation to elderly workers will be caused. Senior employees should develop their advantages of working skills as long as they want to continue staying in their companies to overcome the age discrimination.. Best regards 5971mak.
