Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Suicide attempt mostly complicated with depression is preventable and treattable. Therefore, countermeasures should be taken to save lives. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. I understand that I should have paid attention to the meanings of "raise," "elevate," and "result in". Thank you for detailed revision. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are useful to me. Yes, customers should pay attention to foodborne illnesses, in particular, in hot summer. Restaurants are cautious to those who request bringing back leftover food and usually ask them how long does it take until they go back to their home. When it takes more than 30 minutes, restaurants' clarks put some ice packs into the container cooling leftover food. As long as customers and restaurants are weary to food poisoning, it is a good deed that customer enjoy the leftover on the next day, isn't it? Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Yes, generosity can harm the world such as climate crisis and dire poverty in those who are in need when those who live in well-to-do countries think the issues are not relevant. For example, as scientists proved, climate crisis can bring catastrophic future for the world. Dire poverty can cause fatal infectious diseases to the world. As the world health organization has revealed the fatal consequences of smoking, the world is now directing to smoke free environment. Although ignorance and negligence are frequently occurred, the power of science can change current behaviors and develop the world to be more peaceful society. I believe that people's desire to live in peace and tranquility will change the world for the better little by little. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. I agree with the thing that Mr. Hideo Nomo ( I am sorry for mistaking his name) was more remarkable because he was expelled from the Japanese Baseball League for no permission to him going to the Major League. As his team and manager never agreed with his wish, he was forced to be penalized for his disobedience. He confessed that he might have lost all his honor and accomplishments during the period playing in Japan on a TV program. Some senior players and retired players criticized him as a betrayer to his team mates and his team exectives. If he were one of Japanese citizens, they said that he should have followed instructions ordered by his team exectives. However, after having moved the U.S., his great performance has changed perception of Japanese people and provide that Jpanese players can also play well in the U.S. Therfore, I think that he is a pioneer of Japanese baseball players who can show great achievements in the Major League. He is one of the individuals who realized American dream, resulting change of sentiments over Japanese citizens regarding Mr.Nomo. Best regards, 5971mak
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Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. I agree with the importance of deep reading and note-taking when children raise their abilities of cognitive power. However, I am strongly concerned with visual aids and chatGPT on their smartphones and PCs. Since chatGPT has a power of making documents with auto-correction function, I am afraid that it may increase the children who heavily rely on their digital gadgets. Eventually, they may have difficulty in deep thinking and making persuasive documents as a result of lowering their self-thinking power. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Thank you for corrections regarding article, number agreement, and prepositions. Your corections are useful to me. I agree that we should change daily lifestyle to be sustainable ahead of convenience. Since we were not aware of the danger of negative aspects brought by civilization, we have indulged convenient life. However, science has clearly showcased that we may have the dooms day if we don't transform society to be eco-friendly. Therefore, governments, companies, and individuals should collaborate to tackle climate crisis. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Although instant gratification is common in a society, healthy aging has become popular to reduce their struggling duration after retirement in Japan. When it comes that they are aware of the benefits by healthy habits, the number of individuals, who practice prioritizing good health over the façade of diligence or company royalty, has elevated in Japan. Since Japan has changing drastically with a lot of elderly citizens, governments and companies should help them maintain healthy daily routines. As far as they are good in health, aging can become blessing for them while having a fun time with their families. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
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Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are useful to me. I think that there are two kinds of cafes; one is the place where customers enjoy tastes of a cup of coffee within around 20 minutes and the other is where guests enjoy cafes' atmosphere while staying there for hours with reading books and having a cup of coffee. As visitors can spend a luxurious time, these two different cafe styles are indispensable for citizens to have relaxing time. A cup of cafe can be helpful for them to have active and productive daily life unless not to drink too much coffee. Best regards, 5971mak
