Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Although collective harmony can be useful in elevating working performance as a team, individual needs and personal wishes are essential for one's happiness. Current workplace culture shoud evolve for accepting more individualism in Japan. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. I know one very famous Japanese singer who is well-known in the U.S. as well. She is now sixty-four years old that belongs to age of an elderly. However, few wrinkle appears on her face that is quite eerie compared with general standard looks of her age group. Although she never agree with that she took plastic surgery, it is obvious for her to implement cosmetic treatments for maintaining young face. Since her beauty face is too artificial, I disagree that her outlook in natural. It is painful to watch her trying too hard to look young. Her name is Seiko Matsuda. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Your revision is well-organized, easy to understand, and pursuasive. I will review your corrections. Thank you very much. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
The feedback was very courteous, and the suggested improvements and alternative expressions were clearly explained with reasons, which made it highly instructive.
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Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Recently, large-scale studies from around the world have shown a tendency for people who continue to perform household chores to have higher cognitive function and a lower risk of developing dementia. Having household tasks may be more indispensable than we expected. Best regards, 5971mak
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Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Since public offices are funded by taxpayer's money, they may become a stagnant organization due to stable revenue. To update the organizations to current workers' situation and motivation, I believe that regularly comparing popularity for job seekers with private-sector companies can be useful to develop. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. AI can be useful to save time and money, but it can damage students’ ability to organize their thoughts. Its convenience may increase those who are clumsy for making their opinions. To make young adults independent in doing critical thinking, practical opportunities are indispensable like oral presentation and hands-on experiences. Best regards, 5971mak
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Thank you very much. I will do my best!!
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. In the past, although our society was thought to be a homogeneous demographics, aging population with smaller young work force would transform Japan becoming multicultural and globalized. Through accepting more economic migrants, Japanese residents expand tolerance and accept those who have different belief. By elevating a sense of internationalization, we may realize a sustainable society for next generations. Best regards, 5971mak
