Dear SaraRoseNY, Thank you very much for your advice! That's exactly what I wanted to know and I will take my time to study customary phrases and vocabulary as you mentioned. If there is another opportunity, please offer your support again. Have a nice day! Warm regards, Aoi
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Thank you. Thanks to your correction, I learned how to use "dash" (—) .
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are useful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. I should have written my conclusion that sleeping habit is adapted with family matters. Regardless of my private routines, parents should think about their children first and act accordingly. Therefore, I disagree that society mentions individual's sleeping habit. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Thank you. You answered my questions with some examples. It was very helpful!
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. I understand my conclusion regarding social media topic was abrupt and no evidence was mentioned. I should have mentioned that several local governments enacted regulations as bylaw with fines to parents to stop children's smartphone addiction. Although some people doubt the effectiveness of the bylaw, the legislation could affect parents to pay attention to the addiction. In particular, when children behave delinquency and misconduct with their smartphones, the police will harshly criticize their parents. In Japan, parental supervision is considered more essential than a child's right to freedom. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are useful to me. I have no idea that Hawaii has low humidity. Since it is islands in the pacific ocean, I thought it had high humidity. However, I understand why many travellers choose Hawaii to enjoy their vacations. I am also look forward to visit there if I have a chance to have one week holidays. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. I would like to make sentences smooth out the context and clarify my points. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
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Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Yes, accepting economic migrants is an effective way to keeping the population from going drastically old. I think that there is a strong barrier of xenophobia over residents in Japan. Language barrier is the strongest factor to deter accepting foreigners. The Japanese government should legislate English to be a public language so that more Japanese will be proficient in English. Population aging is already serious issue, so the government should take strong initiative to develop Japanese society ASAP. Best regards, 5971mak
