Dear SaraRoseNY, Thank you very much for correcting my composition. It was really helpful to me. At first, I was confused by your suggestions because they were the words and phrases that I have never thought of or met across. However, as I read them over and over , I realized they are utterly wonderful suggestions to me! Then, I thought, if I acquire those types of expressions, my sentences will improve remarkably. It may take me a lot of time to pursue the target, but I will try it. I am truly grateful for your help. I wish you the best of luck. Best regards, atsuko5
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Although some business leaders are active to diversify Japanese labor market, most of Japanese residents are reluctant to welcome economic migrants. The residents expect robotics to replace human workers, but I am skeptic that robots can work like humans. In some situations such as parts of work processes, machines may be helpful to reduce simple repetitive tasks. However, human labor is indispensable to sustain our society that consists of a lot of hospitality businesses like restaurants, food stalls, accommodation, tourism, and transportation. The Japanese government should start diversity programs in education which push more exchange programs for high school students. While visiting abroad and staying in there, more young people will be aware of importance of globalization. They will be positive learning English which is the world language. Best regards, 5971mak
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Good morning, Sara! Thank you for your helpful advice! It's very difficult to write a English essay like native English writer. I'll do my best! See you soon. Best regards, Midori
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you corrections that are helpful to me. Thank you for questioning. I am glad to explain the current states regarding aquaculture and reckless fishermen at Oma who try catching an once-in-a-lifetime valuable catch. Aquaculture is implemented in a segregated part of ocean with large and tough nets so that fish have to live in the area. As fish breeder feed by spreading fish food into the sea, some amount of food becomes leftover that damages the quality of sea water. When the breeder is careless as for the damage, the fish breeding can cause sea water pollution. Therefore, monitoring of sea water quality is necessary to prevent the pollution. As far as water quality is maintained, the aquaculture is beneficial for both consumers and fisheries. As for the reckless fisherman, as you mentioned, catching fish and seafood in the frigid season is really dangerous. I don’t think the young hope to become the risky profession. When they can have alternative option to work in safe environment like in an office, many of them choose safer work. I think that those who don’t have certification are forced to choose risky fishery to earn big profit. TV programs broadcasts that the reckless fishermen are cool, I don’t think they are happy to continuing dangerous challenge for an once-in-a-lifetime valuable catch. I believe that television shows embellish their stories for ratings. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are useful to me. The weather forecast for this weekend is sunny, so we will be able to see a lot of beautiful fireworks. My whole family is looking forward to watch them. Best regards, 5971mak
Thank you very much! I can understand how to use a colon and a semicolon.
Dear SaraRoseNY, Thank you for the various feedback. Each one is very helpful to me. I'll submit my composition to you again. Regards, Taurus
Thank you for the helpful corrections.
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Hello SaraRoseNY, Thank you always for your corrections and comments. Your works are always so helpful. I really appreciate that. Best regards, Kohei
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
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