Dear SaraRoseNY, Thank you for your kindness and correction. As you said, I got my sad emotion off my chest through this composition. I appreciate that you are always here to help me! Thank you so much. This time, I learnd a lot of natural expressions, such as "seeing the joy on her face", and "it was a remainder..." I'll try to read them repeatedly. I'm going to write another composition soon. Have a good week! Best regards, mkawa
Thank you for your logical and concrete explanation.
Thank you for your detailed explanations.I’ll try connect some short sentences to make them precisely.
Dear SaraRoseNY, Thank you for correcting my writing again, and for teaching me a new idiom. I’ll try to use it when I’m super busy. I'm going to take the Eiken test some time soon. Actually, I failed the test 2 times last year. I hope I will pass the exam next time! Have a great day! Kind regards, wako38
Dear SaraRoseNY, Thank you for correcting my writing again. This morning, two delivery persons installed a new washing machine in the dressing room. This time I purchased the extended warranty for it! Kind regards, wako38
Dear SaraRoseNY, Thank you for correcting my writing again. My son looks so fun every day. Next Monday, he is finally going to start practicing in the group at school for sports day. Kind regards, wako38
Dear SaraRoseNY, Thank you for correcting my writing again! Kind regards, wako38
Dear SaraRoseNY sensei Hi ! Thank you for your early replying and great advices. I will keep doing my best to learn English ! I look forward to the next opportunity. Best regards, Kiyoyoyo
Thank you for your detailed explanation. It is really useful for me. I’ll read that again and again! Thanks again.
Thank you for correcting my essay. I learned several expressions to make sentences more formal and natural. Also I appreciate that you pointed out some mistakes about articles and singular/plural choices!!
Dear SaraRoseNY, Thank you for correcting my writing again! Kind regards, wako38
Thank you, as always,
Thank you for your detailed feedback. I learned many thing from your comments.
Dear SaraRoseNY, Thank you for your kind advice and correction. I didn't know the format "the way Subject + Verb". As I have used this word in the wrong way many times until now, it is so helpful for me. I also learned that "whereas" is stronger than "while". I didn't know the difference. The story that most immigrants who really need to express themselves don't have fear on their mind was understandable. I will have up coming other English events soon, and I'm writing another composition. Have a great Sunday! Best regards, mkawa
Thank you, as always.
