Dear SaraRoseNY, Thank you for your advice, correction, and kindness. I learnt a lot. The words such as "mull over" and "contemplate", which can be used instead of "consider", are new words for me. I understood that the word "mindset" is not a "place" word, so I can't use "where" clause. I am writing another composition. I will send it soon! Have a great week! Best regards, mkawa
Thank you for checking my essay!
いつもとても丁寧に解説してくれます。様々な言い回しも教えていただけるので、ボキャブラリーが増えていきます。とても良い先生です。
Thank you very much for your informative and helpful corrections!
Thank you, as always.
Dear SaraRoseNY, Thank you for proofreading my writing. I'm so glad to read that the first sentence was natural by using "where". I have practiced "where" clause many times for 6 months with you, and finally I am able to use it naturally!!! I also learnt that "by ...ing" is an useful method of connection. From now on, I will use both of them! I'm preparing anther composition!!! Have a great Sunday!!! Best regards, Mkawa
Thank you for checking my essay!
Thank you, as always.
Dear SaraRoseNY, Thank you for detailed proofreading. I learnt a lot, especially about the importance of finding specific words. From now on, I will try to find specific words. I'm sorry that I use "corporate" as "collaborate" in another composition today. I made same mistakes several times. Today, I wrote the next story. Could you correct it, please? Best regards, mkawa
Thank you for your corrections. I was surprised to see it turned into a very sophisticated essay! Yes, I will keep on practicing.
Thank you for your correction. I learned a lot. I will keep writing and want to be better.
Dear SaraRoseNY, Thank you for your compassion and kindness! Now things returned to normal for us, but there are still people who are facing the disaster. I really hope the situation will be better. I learnt that there are more appropriate words than simple and jeneral words. And I didn't use the positive words instead of negative words again... Next time, I'll try them. Also, I'd like to use the word, such as "upon" from now on. I appreciate the detailed proofreading this time! Have a great weekend! Best regards, Mkawa
I always appreciate your correction on my sentences. Thank you.
Dear SaraRoseNY, Thank you for proofreading and messages! I learnt a lot especially how to use Gerund. I want use gerund well, from now on. Yes, having real-life English conversation was wonderful experience, and I realized that I need more practice! I decided to study harder! I'll send another writing to you soon! Have a nice day! Best regards, Mkawa
Dear SaraRoseNY, Thank you for proofreading my writing. I learnt the importance of positive expression. Next time, I will try to use positive words instead of negative words. I'm so happy to send in my composition to you more frequently. Best regards, Mkawa
