Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Thank you. You answered my questions with some examples. It was very helpful!
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. I understand my conclusion regarding social media topic was abrupt and no evidence was mentioned. I should have mentioned that several local governments enacted regulations as bylaw with fines to parents to stop children's smartphone addiction. Although some people doubt the effectiveness of the bylaw, the legislation could affect parents to pay attention to the addiction. In particular, when children behave delinquency and misconduct with their smartphones, the police will harshly criticize their parents. In Japan, parental supervision is considered more essential than a child's right to freedom. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are useful to me. I have no idea that Hawaii has low humidity. Since it is islands in the pacific ocean, I thought it had high humidity. However, I understand why many travellers choose Hawaii to enjoy their vacations. I am also look forward to visit there if I have a chance to have one week holidays. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. I would like to make sentences smooth out the context and clarify my points. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
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Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Yes, accepting economic migrants is an effective way to keeping the population from going drastically old. I think that there is a strong barrier of xenophobia over residents in Japan. Language barrier is the strongest factor to deter accepting foreigners. The Japanese government should legislate English to be a public language so that more Japanese will be proficient in English. Population aging is already serious issue, so the government should take strong initiative to develop Japanese society ASAP. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. When I was a university student, I took part in the international friendship programs by Ministry of Foreign affairs for five years. During the duration, the project aimed to encourage Japanese young students to focus on neighbor countries in Asia. Visiting Asian countries, participants stayed at local community centers with public health nurses, local university students, and village young leaders so that we spread healthy behaviors like drinking boiled water, washing hands clean before eating, and stopping defecation in the river to local people. Before I went to those countries, I imagined people living in developing nations were sad and miserable because TV news channels always broadcasted such crying. Actuarially, they were in dire poverty and struggling for money but they are not unhappy. Although they had to make a lot of effort to save money, locals always collaborated each other to have daily life sharing items and helping daily things with neighbors. That is the reason why the picture on this topic showed children smiling. I learned a lot through the programs including with wisdom "wealth is essential but people who are in need can make themselves happy while helping mutually." Mutual understanding, mutual corporation, and concession to others can become important part for one's happiness. I recalled my experiences and learned essences during the programs by watching children's smile on the picture. Best regards, 5971mak
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Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are useful to me. I strongly recommend our place where a variety fresh seafood is available. Since bullet train "shinkansen" opened nine years ago, the number of travelers from Tokyo regularly come here to enjoy delicious seafood dishes. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections, that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
