Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. I understand that I have missed the answer for the second question. The biggest issue regarding agriculture is that not only the young but also current farmers who are their parents' generation don't hope working as a farmer nowadays. Since current farming is mostly family business with small lands, agriculture is not lucrative and many of adults don't choose a farmer as a profession. Consequently, cultivated land is being abandoned and wasteland is increasing. Expansion of farmland by integrating small croplands of every farmer, mechanization of manual labor, and transformation the family business to company organization should be proceeded to reduse work load and labor cost. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. I understand that I should have used "can", "may", or simple present sentences in case of a description regarding possible consequences. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are useful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
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Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. I agree with selfish behaviors of Princess Martha Louise of Norway, that used the imperial tradition for her private business. Apart from the right to marry, it is not justified for her to earn money by using the honor of royal family. It makes sense that many commoners get angry while knowing her audacious decisions. She should have shown demure attitudes to pacify people's dissatisfaction. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. I agree that typhoons has become stronger than before year after year. The intensity of them are obviously elevating as global warming deteriorates. I am afraid of more damages occurring in wider refions in Japan. Best regards, 5971mak
Hello, SaraRoseNY, How are you? I love the corrections you give me on my submission. This time I learned many new words and expressions from you, thank you. The last two sentences I sent you seem like they didn't make sense to you. ・Preserving discipline is a must for anybody. The ability to maintain discipline is essential for athletes, as it's the foundation of their success. ・ She was an Olympian who represents many Japanese athletes thereby I would say she deserved to receive heavier punishment. As an Olympian representing many Japanese athletes, it's reasonable to argue that she deserved a more severe punishment. I like the idea that you wrote to correct my paragraph. Just what I meant to say was that discipline is essential for people including Olympic athletes, and as she is an Olympian she must have deserved such punishments that were heavier than usual people would receive in this situation. Take care, and see you next time. Yoko
Thank you very much! I can understand the difference between "store" and "shop."
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. I understand my conclusion was ambivalent and not suitable in this topic. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Thank you very much. I can understand how to use "well-being."
Thank you for your kind explanation. it is helpful for me.
Dear SaraRoseNY, Thank you for your corrections! Sorry for the late replay! Best regards, Midori
