I came up with the adjectives "winding" and "picturesque" with the image of a canal in mind, and it worked. I would like to be able to use "get around to-ing" and "take in," which you taught me this time. Thank you very much for your high level of instruction.
I would like to use the present perfect tense appropriately. Also, as you have mentioned, my entry has an excessive use of "I" and it is childish. In the last sentence, I think the one you modified is more sophisticated. Thank you for your qualified guidance.
As for the last one about the excessive use of energy, I certainly should have come to that conclusion. Thanks for the correction, I am convinced about the use of circomstance. I appreciate your high-level guidance.
I realized that I had used "good" and "bad" improperly, and that I shouldn't have used them repeatedly. I also learned that I should try to be concise. On the other hand, I also learned that I need to be more careful in describing what I want to say in the last sentence. I learned a lot from this session. Thank you very much.
Thank you for always revising my entries so thoroughly. I am trying to write like an American would write. I agree with your educational policy. I am also impressed by the need to develop a reliable vocabulary to improve my listening skills. Thank you very much.
Thank you very much for your correction.
Thank you for your work!
Thank you for your always careful correction of my entry. As you said, I should avoid repetitive expressions. I also found that using the expression "but" over and over again makes the meaning difficult to understand. "in any case" seems to work and I would like to use it." I will also stop using "however. Thank you.
Thank you very much for your corretion. I like your correction and comments. The reason I do not appoint any specific teacher is just time matter as I am a monthly regular pass user and has limited private time to work on the suject.
Dear Sara, Thank you for your checking my writing and giving me a lot of advice. In addition, the words and phrases which you suggested to me can help me improve my English skill. I will try to keep learning English. Best.
Dear SaraRoseNY, Thank you so much for your corrections, comments and explanations as always! This time, I learned the difference between come off and come across very well, which was very helpful. Thank you so much again! Have a nice day!:) Best regards, Kimiyo
Thank you very much for your corrections. Your enthusiastic comments, and explanations are very beneficial! .
Thank you again for your careful correction of my diary entry. I would like to thank you for the use of prepositions, address, and I learned a lot about the use of prepositions, the meanings of the words address, poor, capacity and capability, the use of the reason why, etc. I will review it carefully. Thank you very much.
Thank you for correcting my English into natural English!
Sara, Thank you again for correcting my diary entry today. I am committed to quality writing. So your level of guidance is much appreciated. Thank you very much.
