My sentence was unclear in meaning. Your advice is very helpful for me, thank you.
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are useful to me. In Japan, unlike in the US, taking a political stance often is risky because we may suffer from discrimination. It is because that such behaviors may damage a spirit of group harmony at home and workplaces. Many of adults say that geopolitical matters are difficult to judge while hiding their true hearts. We are afraid of having different opinion that getting kicked out from families, friends, and colleagues. While serching true hearts of surrounding people, we show our thoughts little by little to maintain the atmosphere of group unity. Having self-esteem and individualism is still restricted by our traditional social norm. I hope that economic globalization will expand diversity and tolerance through accepting more economic migrants who have different backgrounds in Japan. Best regards, 5971mak
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Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Although addressing concerns the chief priest has is understandable, I don't think that residents in Kyoto expect traditional religious ceremony. Since I was born in Kyoto, circumstance of Kyoto has changed drastically from one of the domestic popular cities to a world-class travel destination now. Not only travellers but also huge number of residents look forward to having a spectacle entertainment experience at the Gion Festival. The three consequtive nights before the parade day are called Yoiyama, so-called eve of the parade of the festival. Many stalls are set up along streets at night, and the floats are decorated with lanterns and traditional solemn music while parking along these streets, creating a splended fantasy ambience. Young people such as high school, university students, and young adults wear yukata robes and enjoy this colorful and gorgeous atmosphere. It resembles to the atmosphere of a night parade at Disneyland park plus classical music. Everyone now enjoys the Gion Festival as an entertainment show, except for the elderly who respect tradition. During the period of the festival, it is said that around 1.5 million people visit Kyoto to enjoy the event. For the reference, the number of Kyoto city population is 1.5 million. Now I live outside Kyoto and usually avoid visiting Kyoto during the festival because of heavy traffic congestion and large crowds. It is really mess. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Currently, the air conditioners are now one of essential appliances, but they have negative impacts to human health. So users ahould be familiar with benefits and disadvantages to prevent unfamiliar negative influence. Civilization is not always beneficial but it occasionally can be harmful unintentionally. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are useful to me. Many Japanese, especially female workers are also nervous not to make their shoes smudged with muddy water during the rainy season. Since they think that elegant outfit is a part of their good impression to others, the droplets of muddy water damage their decent atmosphere. Therefore, a waterproof spray becomes popular not to get their beatuful shoes dirty. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Dear SaraRoseNY, Thank you for your informative explanation and answering my question. I understood how to use "could." I often wrote "I could..." as my ability in the past, but it can be confusing, so I'll try to choose "I was able to..." from now on. The positive tone which you revised for me was totally suitable to the situation. I tended to choose negation, but I want to think and write constructively, so I have to change it. I also appreciate your agreement to my statement about human nature. I will send another writing soon! Have a great week! Best regards, mkawa
Thank you for your correction on my sentences. Other than Pokémon, my son is interested in super Mario!
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Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Thank you for your detailed feedback. I would like to try to explain specifically next time.
