Thank you for your comments and feedback to my sentences. I would like to write more regularly to improve my writing skill.
Thank you for your guidance on the use of "it is + adjective + to-infinitive" and for reworking my sentence into a clean and clear sentence. It was very helpful.
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Thank you for showing me how to use words I could never imagine, such as moreover is not often used, on the top of is used casually, and for introducing me to common technical terms. They are all helpful. Also, I really learn a lot from your guidance to native speakers' expressions.
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Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Since lifestyle diseases becomes common, it is necessary for authority to emphasize personal responsibility for the prevention of the diseases. However, the government should have responsibility for public education and continue helping citizens. If officials decrease their assistance, serious sicknesses increase and cause more economic damages in their society through disabling. Therefore, authority should make effort to provide not only information but also help for the people who are in need. Best regards 5971mak
My apologies for the late reply. Thank you for your explanations and suggestions. I look forward to taking your lesson again.
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Thank you very much for your correction. I could learn a new word which describes me!
Teacher SaraRoseNY I understand your explanation and corrections. Thank you for your impressive sentences that are educational to me. Best regards 5971mak
