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Dear SaraRoseNY, Thank you for your insightful advice and correction. I learned "early verb structure" many times in your corrections, but I couldn't write sentences in the way. I have to keep it in my mind. The words "voice" and "question" which you introduced are useful. I didn't use them as verbs so far. "Viability" is also new word for me. It can be useful to make sentence concise. I'll use these words in my English conversation class soon! Have a great Sunday!! Best regards, mkawa
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Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. The criminal law places great importance on precedents in Japan, and sometimes decisions are made that are far from the public sentiment. By having participation of the lay judges in trials, the proceedings can be discussed more objectively. I believe that the situation where police force confessions through aggressive interrogations will decrease, and fair trials based on evidence will increase. Best regards, 5971mak
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