Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. I understand the importance of logical order for the effective writting to emphasize my thoughts. I would like to write esseys with such strategy. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are useful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Hello Sara, Thank you very much for reviewing my writing! Your comments are full of information and gives me lots of insights. I'm impressed by your comments! Kind regards, Naoto
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Anti-aging movement has become popular due to both preference of the elderly and the Japanese government. Since the birth rate has been very low, authority plot a tactics to delay the retirement age for reducing the budget of pension system. As long as anti-aging can contribute to boost happiness over elderly people, the plot can make sense to prevent from collapse of social security in Japan. Best regards, 5971mak
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Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Since I am one of the fish eateries, I earnestly hope that fish will ever regain its past popularity. While fish farming has become a real nowadays such as salmon, mackerel, and tuna, fish farming industry is struggling for prevention of marine pollution. When corporations breed fish in a segragated sea area by using fishing nets, scattered sea food can disseminate into outside of the area through the net. As a result, leftover fish food can damage its sea environment, which can destroy ecosystem in pacific ocean. It is the reason why fish farming is not common yet. To protect our environment, fish farming is strictly regulated. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. According to the government's future projections, 744 municipalities, or 40% of all municipalities, will have less than half of their young female population in the 25 years leading up to 2050, and these municipalities will then face a rapid decline in population and are at risk of eventually disappearing. It is clearly urgent for us to revitalize such countryside areas. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Fair competition for university applicants is indispensable to raise vitality and a sense of fairness among the young. Legacy status of univercity entrance examination was once common over private universities. However, due to a lack of fair competition, it was abolished several decades ago in Japan. Fair competition should be placed as one of the essential part of society to make society activated. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. I understood that I should have mentioned stigma regarding drowsiness and nodding during working hours. The drowsiness can figure out a difference of cultures between westerners and Japan. The nap is commonly appraised among co-workers including their bosses because they think that one work a lot without rest. Having a nap can become a kind of appraise for workers who work very hard in Japan. On the other hand, when a worker feel drowsy or have nodding off, it will make one criticised and one will be seen as an employee who cannot manage by oneself. Having a nap in between can illustrate the difference of cultures. Best regards, 5971mak
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Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Yes, I have read "Pride and prejudice", "The Firm", and "Submission" in English. The time to read them in Engish was somewhat stressful to understand by connotation and innuendo, but they were still fun time for me to read. While reading contents in English, I learned how different Japanese think a way from Westerners. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
