Dear SaraRoseNY, Thank you very much for your kind corrections and suggesting alternatives. They are really helpful for improving my sentences. As always, I learned a lot of important knowledge about writing English from your corrections. I haven't been able to tell which word I should choose and been particular about using effective words to explain my thoughts well so far. I would like to acquire your style of writing. I strongly appreciate it. It may take me a lot of time to acquire it, but I want to continue my efforts. I am grateful for your warm support. Best regards, atsuko5
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are useful to me. One of the causing misinformation regarding the image of Mt. Fuji is exaggeration of the view from afar. Due to such a picturesque wonderful image, watchers can wrongly perceive the mountain must be a peaceful place. Local authorities should give warning to those who plan to crime. Best regards, 5971mak
Dear SaraRoseNY, Thank you very much for your kind corrections and suggesting alternatives. They are really helpful for improving my sentences. I am impressed by your advice to use "the language" instead of "English". I would like to be able to use "the language" and make better sentences. I appreciate the words list you recommended. I will read the explanations you gave me again and again and try to acquire better way of writing as you indicated. I am also pleased with your encouragement to do my best on the exam. I am grateful for your warm support. Best regards, atsuko5
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. I agree with the young traveling abroad more, particularly when they are flexible to notice the difference of cultures and traditions. Seeing how diverse the world is, they can be equipped with the idea of multiculturism and tolerance to those who have different beliefs. Their experiences can grow the mindset of diversity, which can contribute to make Japan a cosmopolitan country. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are useful to me. In my opinion, since Toyota has a lot of patents to manufacturing hybrid engine vehicles, they will not be eager to collaborating with other brands to keep their advantages. As far as they can continue profitable operations, they will maintain sole existence for a while. However, as global warming worsens, more investment will be indispensable to invent new technology for reneuable engine cars. The amount of investment can be a huge so that even Toyota may need to belong to a corporate alliance in the future. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. The wisdom "let it go" you mentioned is truely impressive for me. Since I am not familiar with violence in daily life, peace is one of those things we take for granted. Thus, when I face dire conditions like the Gaza conflict and Russian invasion in Ukraine, I have no idea how to solve them. However, from now on, Japan will be involed with diversification on the way to accept economic migrants. Peace is not persistent, so the Japanese government should take actions to expand the idea of multi-cultualism among residents. "let it go" can be critical to sustain Japanese society. Best regards, 5971mak
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Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Many Japanese people believe that white people, especially Western people, are superior. In addition, Japanese-speaking Caucasians are popular on TV. I think Japanese people praise Japanese-speaking white people because they can't speak English. The Japanese global mindset is often not holistic but limited because many executive boards make a limitation of foreign executives while claiming globalization. As a result, many companies keep it in mind to continue traditional Japanese style, processes, and decision-making that may be outdated in the globlized market. Japanese companies shold increase more affiliation and partnership with foreign companies and investers to survive in their competitive circumstances. Best regards, 591mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are useful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Thank you, as always.
Thank you, as always.
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that teach me appropriate word choices. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are impressive and orderly writting. Your sentences are thought provoking and persuacive. Best Regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are useful to me. Having good health has now become a common interest for citizens because many of them feel anxious in their future when aging rapidly ongoing in Japan. To lengthen their wholesome health in lifetime, they intentionally pay attention to preventing lifestyle sicknesses nowadays. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. In Japan, day care centers are not only for children but also the elderly. Since public elderly care giving services have started, day care centers for fragile elderly people have been established to look after them. I should have written "day care centers for the elderly." In fact, some local authorities established such facilities beside public halls, kindergartens, shopping malls, and schools to foster chances communication and interection between the elderly and the young. Best regards, 5971mak
