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Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Since lifestyle diseases becomes common, it is necessary for authority to emphasize personal responsibility for the prevention of the diseases. However, the government should have responsibility for public education and continue helping citizens. If officials decrease their assistance, serious sicknesses increase and cause more economic damages in their society through disabling. Therefore, authority should make effort to provide not only information but also help for the people who are in need. Best regards 5971mak
My apologies for the late reply. Thank you for your explanations and suggestions. I look forward to taking your lesson again.
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Thank you very much for your correction. I could learn a new word which describes me!
Teacher SaraRoseNY I understand your explanation and corrections. Thank you for your impressive sentences that are educational to me. Best regards 5971mak
I came up with the adjectives "winding" and "picturesque" with the image of a canal in mind, and it worked. I would like to be able to use "get around to-ing" and "take in," which you taught me this time. Thank you very much for your high level of instruction.
I would like to use the present perfect tense appropriately. Also, as you have mentioned, my entry has an excessive use of "I" and it is childish. In the last sentence, I think the one you modified is more sophisticated. Thank you for your qualified guidance.
As for the last one about the excessive use of energy, I certainly should have come to that conclusion. Thanks for the correction, I am convinced about the use of circomstance. I appreciate your high-level guidance.
I realized that I had used "good" and "bad" improperly, and that I shouldn't have used them repeatedly. I also learned that I should try to be concise. On the other hand, I also learned that I need to be more careful in describing what I want to say in the last sentence. I learned a lot from this session. Thank you very much.
Thank you for always revising my entries so thoroughly. I am trying to write like an American would write. I agree with your educational policy. I am also impressed by the need to develop a reliable vocabulary to improve my listening skills. Thank you very much.
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