Dear SaraRoseNY, Thank you so much for your corrections, comments and explanations as always! This time, the explanation of the usage of the determiner “those” was very helpful. I am often confused when I talk about the general people. So I’m glad to know that “those” is preferred in that case. Thank you so much again. Have a nice day!:) Best regards, Kimiyo
Dear SaraRoseNY, Thank you so much for your corrections, comments and explanations as always! It is so much fun for me to read how you felt about my essay. Thank you so much again. Have a nice day!:) Best regards, Kimiyo
Dear SaraRoseNY, Thank you for your advice! Have a nice weekend. Mashroom
Thank you for your feedback with helpful comments and tips. I found your views on the topic interesting and insightful too!
Thank you very much for correcting me with extensive comments. It was lunch time work and I did not have enough time to review. But it was a good reminder of subjunctive verb forms! I do appreciate it. Best regards, Koji
Hello SaraRoseNY, Thank you sooo much for your corrections, comments and explanations! I am surprised and happy to receive them because they are much more detailed than I expected and I did understand them clearly! I’ll keep it up! Thanks again and have a great day:) Best regards, Kimiyo
Thank you for your detailed tips!! I'll keep practicing!
Thank you for your correction and comments. Your feedback is always helpful to me.
Thank you for your feedback with useful tips I can refer to improve my sentences.
Thank you for your suggestions!
Hi SaraRoseNY, Thank you for giving me helpful advice again! Yes, you're right. My daughter could be bilingual in the future. That's is amazing! I'll support her as much as I can. Also your advice is very helpful for me. Thank you, Ayumi
Hello SaraRoseNY Thank you so much for your corrections, kind comments. They were really helpful! I got motivated a lot by reading Your message! I will keep doing this!! Best regards, Kimiyo
Dear SaraRoseNY How are you ? It's nice to hear from you here again. I think this time my writings didn't make sense to you in many points, as I missunderstood the meaning of the article. As you point out, a Go store has already opened. It was not easy to correct my essay. Thank you for the patience. You wrote "shoppers were being put in invisible ankle monitoring devices just like criminals." that's funny expression, but actually really scary. I hope to see you soon again. Bye for now. Yoko
Thank you for your feedback and useful tip about the proper choice of the words, “conscious” and “mindful”!
Thank you for giving me an advice!I just started this system, so I'll think over that you gave me the suggestion. Thank you!!!
