Dear SaraRoseNY, Thank you for your kindness. I really appreciate your insightful advice and correction. As you said, reading English book and explaining it in English are very good practice for me. I'm going to continue it. The difference among "lately," "these days," and "recently" is useful, so I will use them in my conversation lesson! I got many new expression, such as "vicariously experience" (which is better than "simulate"), and "exist" (which is better choice with location than "there is.") In addition, I didn't know that general adverbs like "currently" are awkward at the end of sentences. I'll be careful about those points in the next writing. Best regards, mkawa
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are useful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Becoming one of the known overachivers in their own field is not easy to realize, excepting for the gifted. In many cases, wealthy parents provide their children with private tutors and supports of off-campus accomplishments so that they can become talented. Under such circumstance, there is still a large disparity of wealth over applicants, but the free tuition initiative can work as a kind of affirmative actions towards classism. Despite of their struggling households, some students can be talented by their own effort and may get the offer to be accepted to Harvard University. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are useful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
I'm glad that you recognised my cat's breed. Yes, she is soo adorable that a friend of mine and my sister adopted British shorthairs after seeing my cat.
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. In general, we are not in favor of revolutions for daily lives, but smartphones are so attractive that many people use them day and night. The digital gadget drastically changed our mindset to accepting smartphones. Dictionary apps are now one of the essentials for our lives and we can save time day by day. Although there are paper dictionaries and electric one in my book schelf, they have become a kind of ornament in my room nowadays. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are useful to me. The hometown tax system can tell us the importance of market principals. For several decades, the Japanese government has provided a lot of subsidies to activate local economy in rural areas. However, most of the investment don't work but caused a lot of national debt after all. A governor of Fukui prefecture, Mr. Kazumi Nishikawa, proposed the tax system to our national government on 2008. Since he was one of the senior officials in the Ministry of Home Affairs, he could collaborate with the government and the hometown tax system was established. Now, many municipalities in countryside regions have been hassling to produce quality specialties and items. As many rural towns are shrinking rapidly, the tax system is now essential to survive by stimulating their local economy. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. I understand that the effectiveness of double negative for the firm negation and educational aspects of giveaway for unsold food. Still, overproduction of food is common over grocery stores to boost their daily sales. However, they should pay attention more to reduce unsold food for environment as well. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Thank you for always changing my sentences into beautiful passages!
Thank you, as always.
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
